“I said leave” Khushi shouted again. “And if you think feeding this thought in my head will make me vulnerable again then you are wrong. Me or NK are not responsible for Arnav’s mother’s death and I am sure the Raizadas will agree with us when they know this”
“Will they?” Shashi smiled with sarcasm. “I don’t think so”
He pointed Khushi towards the gate where Arnav Singh Raizada was striding towards his car. He looked pale and completely lost. He had just got out from the monitoring room where Akash had set up his technology for tracing her father’s phone to check his connection with Viraj.
“I think he got to know it too from his Spy friend” Garima added.
Khushi felt her body weakening. Did Arnav get to know? Why was he leaving and where to in the middle of their engagement? She saw Aman running behind Arnav and trying to stop him but Arnav shrugged him off and got in his car. In no time, the vehicle accelerated out of the Gupta Mansion with Aman cursing himself for not being able to stop his friend.
Note: I know many of you were unhappy with the twist in the last chapter of Lawful Sins. I would say, please be patient and I will do my best with this fiction. Wouldn't let it screw up.
Will post this part on Monday morning. Tomorrow precap for You Ought to be Mine 3 will be posted
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ReplyDeleteSad Precap. I am sure Arnav wil understand that Khushi is not at fault. He needs some time. Arshi's love is not weak. Feeling sad for Khushi though
ReplyDeleteOh Nooo Arnav left Khushi alone in their engagement party...How will she handle this now...She kept saying this to Arnav that never break her trust...Will she be able to trust Arnav again if he dont return back to the engagement party...Waiting for Full Update...
ReplyDeleteWe trust your writing and know that whatever twist you give is accepted and as a writer you know very well. So will wait with patience
ReplyDeleteNice Precap.. pleas give us one more update of yaadein.. pretty please if possible
ReplyDeleteWith your permission ma'am, can we please read lawful sins. It was delayed last week with 2 yaadein updates + 2 day break from madhu.
DeleteThis week it has been delayed to monday too. If there will be a yaadein update we will have to wait till tuesday
I so love when readers fight for their favourite story������. I'm ta ok with whatever she update. They are so cute.
DeleteEvery reader has a right to put ahead their request my dear.. I know lawful has been postponed to Monday and I have no intentions to make Madhu postpone it more.. she just said that there are will be no more update till Monday.. hence I requested for a yaadein update if possible for tomorrow and then lawful will be updated as planned on Monday.. however I do no wish her to make some of you lawful sins readers to be upset hence I don't mind waiting.. but keeping my request ahead is my right so kindly don't stop me from that dear.. thank you
DeleteI think this the real test of their love because love without understanding never get success .
ReplyDeleteWithout twist and turn the story won't be good. Your way of writing is aw
ReplyDeleteThis is a huge blow to Khushi's self esteem. And if we go by the character arc of Khushi in this story she will not be able to forgive Arnav, I guess. May be its high time Arnav runs behind Khushi. From the start if this FF, although Arnav was a better person than Khushi, in their relationship Khushi was more invested than Arnav. May it be a test for Arnav's affetion towards khushi too.
ReplyDeleteAnd If Arnav become late in returning, may be Khushi would cut him off for ever from her life. It is possible considering Khushi's character.
End lawful sins. The story is already ruined. Its so predictable.
ReplyDeleteAlso you have already screwed lawful sins. No mirch masala can make it feel better
ReplyDeleteHope khushi doesn't take any haste decisions and wait for arnav
ReplyDeleteArnav should hav at least left a message for khushi.. agreed he must be hurt knowing the truth..but whts khushi's fault.. being hurt doesn't give you liberty to hurt others as well
ReplyDeleteYes lawful sins has been neglected since past 2-3 weeks. The writing has become so bland. There is no more chemistry between arshi in writing. Even the twist now seems silly and unrealstic. Sorry Madhu I never complained earlier but now i am totally disappointed. I feel you are not invested in this lawful sins anymore. Sad.
ReplyDeleteYar madhu pls don't make misunderstanding between them...they have tolerate enough...
ReplyDeleteWaiting for Monday
Madhu can you please put some focus on this story. It feels neglected. Painful to see this happening to a once favorite story.
ReplyDeleteYour forever reader
So boring ugh
ReplyDeleteMadhu Di we trust you. We love your writing no matter what. And about twist and turn, it is obviously necessary for story to move forward.
ReplyDeleteWhy are reader not understanding this being writer one have story already built up in thier head. When someone so rudely comment on how they are disappointed and they will stop reading bla bla will only demotivate the writer. If you don't want to read then don't. There are many readers who continuously wait for update and enjoy her story the way she proceeds.
If you can't support her then just back up you have no right to comment about her writing. She is entertaining us from so long and we love her dearly.
Love you Di.
Eagerly waiting for full update.
If the readers don't complain, how will the writer improve?
DeleteIt's more harmful to suggest a person "All is ok" and her sincere followers should be true to her.
What Lawful sins readers are unhappy with:
ReplyDelete1. Late updates (Delayed either due to yaadein or madhu takes a break before its update)
2. Excellent story in the beginning that turned typical and boring with time.
3. Criminal angle. Not every story tolerates he/she was killed because of this and that person is responsible. Very old, very typical
4. It looks like A&K are frequently intimate in the time they spend together. But "He kissed her passionately" has been inserted too many times that it feels bland. There is more to intimacy writing before the final act and writer should be careful not to repeat same line every time.
I am a romance novel reader and things prick me hard
Story has reached its almost 50 parts. I don't think anything can be done. The best we can do is to lower or expectations or like someone suggested to end it soon to prevent further damage. Its painful but .....
The moment NK's fight, akash and gupta twist started the storyhas lost charm. Arnav and khushi are boring also
DeleteLoved the update. Madhu I loved ur every ff. We can't expect only romance in every story. I like your writing no matter what. I have been reading ur story since years and i trust u.
ReplyDeleteI like what u write so nice update
ReplyDeleteLooking forward
ReplyDeleteNice update madhu di ..your this kind of twist makes the story wonderful . All stories of yours are very nice and different plot than each other .Only YOU can think so much lovely plot .And I trust you , you will never disappoint your readers ; no problem take your time will wait for your update.Till then I will read some of your other ff��.
ReplyDeletei just loved the twist...i loved the strong khushi...why everybody making its a issue...in the serial the twist during arshi wedding was also this type...i have faith on madhu di.. she will solve this beautufully...
ReplyDeletei just loved the twist...i loved the strong khushi...why everybody making its a issue...in the serial the twist during arshi wedding was also this type...i have faith on madhu di.. she will solve this beautifully...
ReplyDeleteAwesome love 💕 twists.. looking forward next updates
ReplyDeleteInteresting precap..
ReplyDeleteI trust you
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. Let's see how the story gets unfold.
ReplyDeleteSis, you are my favorite writer. I know no matter what you will turn this into an amazing story. I’m not upset with the plot. But I find it hard to relate it to the title of the story. They are not related lawfully as in the season 1. That’s the only issue I have with this story. I had this problem even in the kanyadan. I didn’t like how it turned to be an action and serious story at the end. I’m waiting to see how you unfold all this mess. Thank you for reserving your time for us in your busy life!!
ReplyDeleteThis is the only think even i felt from the almost the start as soon as arnav amd khushi started to no more be attached to contract, it was no lawful sins, the first season however had a solid law involved. But still this also a good plot with unexpected turns, keep writing❤️
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