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What will be Arnav's next moves in He Loves Me Not?


First of all, thank you so much for all your opinions on the Chat on Badtameez fiction we had last week. I really appreciate how each one of you get engrossed in the story and its characters and have vivid opinions on how the characters and the story should progress. It makes me feel like I am co-writing with each one of you.



Now today's topic of discussion is Arnav Singh Raizada's next moves in He Loves Me Not. So many of us have called him spineless, weak and unable to take a stand for himself. A small roadside boy who doesn't even know who his real parents are, was beaten, made to slog for a portion of bread, yet hungry to survive in this cruel world. He was suddenly adopted by a couple, given a life which he never could dream about even in his next 7 births. Whatever their motives behind his adoption be, he still got a place to hide, to grow, to learn, to eat and sleep without the fear of being hurt. Having said that, why wouldn't he oblige to their wishes over his? He knows to judge between the right and wrong but all he cares is to keep that couple happy. He did it this far and now suddenly he has realized there is one thing he cannot do as per their wish. Though his father took it positively and in his favor, what will be his mother's reactions?

There are so many questions unanswered yet;

1. Why was Arnav adopted?
2. Why is Revati so distant from him?
3. Does the couple have another child?
4. Who are Arnav's real parents? Are they alive?
.... And so many more...

On the other hand, Khushi Gupta!! 

She never got the love of a mother but her father didn't let her miss that affection. He dotes on her and is responsible enough to ensure she gets a good life. He is never going to go against her wishes. So having that level of love and support around her, she grew up standing for her rights always. And in the process, fell in love with Arnav, a boy she thought needed help... love and affection, similar to what she had. Her attraction in the teenage led her to spend a night with that man. Though he was drunk, whatever little happened between them on his 22nd birthday night touched her hopes from him to the sky. But he shattered all her dreams the next morning. It is natural for her to feel dejected but she didn't lose hope. She came back, completing her education, becoming something he could be proud of her. She tried her ways to convince him. She made him realize his decision to marry Sheetal was wrong and can never be fruitful. But when none of this worked and he kept pushing her away still, she agreed to her father's wishes to see other suitors for her.. Akash Sharma being one of them. Khushi Gupta is now in the ignoring mode for Arnav Singh Raizada. Yes the tables have turned. But for how long?


The question remains:

1. Will she come to know of his breakup with Sheetal? Will that stop her from going back to London?
2. What do you think should be Arnav's next actions to sort the web of relationships he has created?Should he chase Khushi to London? Or settle the dust first which he has spilled on their professional ties with Mathurs?
3. What major role is Aman yet have to play between the Raizadas- Mathurs- Guptas- Sharmas?
4. Is Akash genuinely interested in Khushi Gupta?
5. Will Akash - Khushi bond take a different angle to burn Arnav Singh Raizada?
6. Who will Raj Mathur support? His son's affinity towards the Raizadas? His own friendship with Ayush? Or his revengeful Daughter?
7. Will Arnav - Revati relationship get more tangled?
..... And many more.

I would love to hear your opinions about this fiction.



64 comments:

  1. I think if khushi will return back to London arnav will come after her...it seems he didn't react about the cheque yet...revati attitude is still a mystery for me..she seems snobbish just like Sheetal...ayush n aman can be those who maybe will help arnav in his mission for khushi or will arnav force a marriage no I don't think so his character is not like ...I will wait for next updates

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  2. Khushi after knowing sheetal and arnavs broken engagement, she should not has to stay in india. Khushi should go back to london, then arnav will realise khushi's value. And she should not forgive arnav so easily.....!

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  3. Arnav should clear the mess first...I want to see akash khushi relationship to grow may be as friend but definitely arnav should not know that...
    Hope mathur will support his friend and son....and regarding sheetal, I think she will take a big step next...
    But above all...this time most difficult will be khushi gupta...because wooing khushi will not be easy...

    Let's see what you have planned...

    It's a great story...waiting for next part

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  4. I think arnav should do both things simultaneously by solving the business mess and personal mess at home while wooing the khushi back on the other hand though not being with her physically for some time until his home/business mess sorts. Common he is a business tycoon he can take care of little things about khushi in London through his contacts.
    I think khushi will go to London for her mental peace and self respect.
    I think revati is a selfish person she will create a big mess on not becoming a club president.
    Aman will support arnav and raj will be more towards ayush and aman then sheetal although in a subtle non direct ways.

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  5. Why is revathy so much distant from arnav. Aman hopefully shld help in clearing mess between the mathurs and raizadas. I think arnav does not kniwcabt the cheque...he must hv come to tell khushi abt his breakup with sheetal.

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  6. I want arnav to voice out his feelings for kushi both his parents and then he should chase her till she accepts him. He shouldn't hurt him parents. No one should hurt their parents either own or adopted. He must speak out his feelings to revathi so that she should accept kushi as her bahu. I'm sure she won't have any ill feelings towards arnav. If she has one she would have voiced it out before adoption itself. She is not a woman who takes anything thrown at her. But I'm waiting to know how you are going to proceed this story

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  7. Arnav is going to follow khushi to london to woo her back in his life and they have shared what happened between them on arnav 22nd birthday which gave her hope in love with love. And regarding revathi, she didn't accept arnav as her son, just using him for her benefits. But ayush genuinely love arnav. Hope aman plays a role to clear misunderstanding between madurs and razaida. Waiting for next update eagerly...

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  8. What had happened on his birthday night?

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  9. I think if Arnav chases Khushi to London,it will be great..But before that he will solve all the complications...when there will be no difficulties between them,he will go to London and woo Khushi back..Meanwhile,Khushi won't know about what's happening in India, she will be trying to settle in London...But before wooing Khushi,Arnav has to take permission from Mr.Gupta and Buaji

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  10. If you update a chapter where Arnav will be reminiscing his 22nd Birthday night,it will be great😍

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  11. Khushi will definitely go to London and arnav also clear the mess what he created himself and revathi character is mysterious to me I hope am an support arnav and I want khushi also give tough time for him not leave him easily and 22nd birthday secret will be revealed soon so that we can get clear view of arnav's interest on khushi and arnav stand for his love and woo her not leave anybody but your conclusion is always mesmerizing me so what you store for us?

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  12. Even if Khushi come to know about Arnav's break up with Sheetal that shouldn't stop her from leaving to London. All the mess has been created by Arnav so he has to settle both . Aman and Mathur's may take the matter lightly but Sheetal won't sit quietly. Akash can be a good friend to Khushi and it will be fun to see a jealous ASR. Raj Mathur may support Aman and his friend . Revati is little cold and distant from Arnav . In fact the don't share the mother son relationship. And she doesn't like Khushi and also using Arnav. Arnav has a huge task to convince her . Ayush Raizada will support Arnav . Khushi has to stay away from Arnav for sometime now.

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  13. I have one more doubt , why was sheetal very adamant in settle with arnav ? According to her attitude and part affair she is not a type of girl who liked to settle 🤔. Is it bcz Raizada tag ? Who cares now arnav broke the engagement.

    Madhu di I never think about arnav real parents will be alive or not . I thought they were dead and not important. Look like you have much more plan than ArShi love concept . I’m more more excited😍.

    For me Khushi need to go to London for her peace of mind . If again arnav caught between his adoptive parents, sheetal and business mess , decide to do anything against his wish . Khushi will be more hurt . So please let Khushi to go dear . Don’t stop her . Arnav can go after the mess he created or Khushi can come here .
    I’m really don’t want Khushi to show interst in akash . Pretty please . Khushi need to be strong to face arnav . If Khushi used akash to forget arnav or ignore arnav . It will demolished Khushi strong mind lady attitude . So no akash and Khushi relationship. Just friend ok . Not more than that please .............






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  14. I don't think khushi will still have a reaction on break up of arnav and sheetal

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  15. Revati is selfish,judemental,egoistic,classy freak and she doesn't really love arnav she is formal to him because she doesn't go against ayush wish this is my opinion about revati

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  16. Arnav will most probably wait for khushi till she returns to India,this ff arnav is really useless he is ASR to only khushi I so wanted him to lash out on sheetal in asrish style Ian so dissapointed with this arnav

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  17. I guess Khushi will know about the breakup before she goes London for sure. Either the news will be splashes everywhere or I have a feeling Aman and Akash will drop a hint and she will get to know or even better Arnav himself will go talk to her once he gets the envelope, that one last chat before she leaves kinda thing and that might tempt her to stay back but she should go back to London. Arnav has to earn her back, she can't give in to him easily.
    Secondly I feel Arnav should settle all the mess first. With his mother, the Mathurs and also Sashi. He should go after Khushi only with Sashi's permission is what I feel. Sashi is a wonderful man and he loves his daughter a lot,he knows Khushi loves Arnav and when he gets to know Arnav loves her back I am sure he will also support their relationsip. He might be reluctant at first, but for the sake of his daighter's happiness he will give in so Arnav should first get Sashi's approval before pursuing Khushi.
    And rahi baat Khushi aur Akash ki she has clearly said she wont be able to love anyone else or take anybody other than Arnav as her partner and now even Sashi understands her stand so its better to make their bond limited to friendship itself. This is a tough time for her, I hope Akash gives her the shoulder she can lean upon. I wish she is in contact with Aman as well.. they did seem to have built small rapport after their conversation in the cafe so it would be good to see their friendship blooming and he can also give her updates on Arnav without Arnav being aware of that? Basically Aman as a cupid and also both of their friends is what i mean. Meanwhile Arnav can think she was moved on, he has lost her and all that, he does deserve a taste of his own medicine. He needs to know how Khushi must have felt when she saw the love of her life get engaged to someone else or how she felt when he kept pushing her away. So a couple of months separation and also the fear of Akash and Khushi taking their relationship forward must do that I suppose?
    Oh god I am going crazy with all the idea lol don't mind me. ��

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    1. i agree wd u nd i luv the Aman n Khushi frndshp point dat wud be fun. Aman cn share details of Akash-Khushi reln wd Arnav nd make him jealous ;)

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    2. Yes, that was exactly what I was thinking. Like when Aman met Khushi and Alash in that cafe he came to Arnav and showed him their pictures he can do that in future as well when Khushi leaves for London and Arnav is left there solving all the mess before he can go woo his girl and set everything right for good.

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  18. Guess Khushi will definetely go to London this time and Arnav will talk to his mother about his feeling for Khushi...Aman i guess he's friend with Akash and both had plan this to make Arnav accept his feeling toward Khushi...Shashi is a great Father here...he really understand his daughter feeling...Once Khushi left to London Madhu plzzz one request i want to you to make Arnav follow her there to WIN her...Coz ArShi are meant to be TOGETHER FOREVER...

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  19. I want Arnav to voice out his feeling before Khushi leaves India and seek her help and to be his strength to clear out all the mess...Khushi being khushi would stay back accept his love and become his strength and together with Aman shasi and Ayush they will face all the mess and should raise heights...in this process Ayush being on Arnavs side and Revathi being not supportive should realise money is not everything...relationships and her son Arnav Are her real assets

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  20. Would also love to see Amans love track as well

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  21. To many questions were asked.
    1) I won't call Arnav a coward. He is doing what ever he could to repay his gratitude for the favor done by adopting him. But whatever he has done towards Khushi is right when seen through his prospective. he try to protect her by hurting her feeling and so on.
    2)Arnav has to clear the mess created by his break up and then follow Khushi
    3) Arnav has to feel the same pain that Khushi under gone whenever she saw Arnav and Sheetal together.
    4) Aman would defiantly support Arnav his best friend

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  22. I will prefer a short separation.Arnav should clear the mess first because he is the only one who is responsible for all these mess.Aman might play a key role in solving the problems of Arnav. Waiting for next update

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  23. Dont put their relation at edge by kushi returng to london without knowng arnv's broken engagment.... First both should confrnt eachother before kushi heading back... Hope it will happen.. Otherwise there will be progression on relation with akash. I dn't want to happen that at all.

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  24. It is amazing FF, Arnav is not authoritive in this he has to go behind Kushi to London and woo her.

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  25. I miss the previous chat

    Arnav was adopted for their personal benefits from the looks of it. Ayush brought him home but to adopt a child is a big decision and Revati being so class conscious adopting him shows that they had some personal interests

    Revati is a high class woman who cares only for her status so that explains why she isn't a real mother to Arnav. She probably would be the same if he was her own child.

    May be Arnav's are alive. I hope they are because he deserves parents genuine love and care

    It's possible that these Raizadas adopted Arnav because they had no child to carry their legacy or lost their or the child is incapacitated to take care of him or herself.
    That's why Ayush may have wanted to transfer everything to Arnav in his will which he hasn't accepted. Clearly where will their property go if Arnav won't take it. If they really thought and raised him like a son they would have long back tried to bring him close to them and not see their expenses on him as a favour. Like Khushi wanted to return the money spent on her to Ayush same way Arnav had returned their favour.

    It's just Arnav feels that they brought him home gave him shelter food and a life he didn't expect

    I don't agree that Arnav is spineless. He is a vulnerable guy who thinks he owes his existence to his adoptive parents. Now that he knows he can't take it anymore he broke up. He knows what happened to Khushi and how she treated was wrong. He has stood up for Khushi in front of Sheetal and even his father regardless of what he told Khushi.

    I find Arnavs who dance on Anjali tunes and even destroys Khushi's life more spineless.
    Saying things to hurt someone for parents is different from deliberately taking actions and forcing some girl to keep his pampered sister happy and letting others insult her in your presence is spineless. Most times Anjali has done nothing for him while he has always been supportive of her.

    Here Arnav has done nothing of this sort.

    Khushi will know before she leaves most likely because Sheetal will pull all strings to get back
    Arnav would have to sort his business issues because it's about many people's livelihood. He can't run after Khushi with the mess here. He wouldn't want Khushi to get caught in cross fire

    Aman so far has come across as not so much relevant as a son the only thing He has done is push him towards Khushi. If he was a strong man he'd have kept his father in loop about what Sheetal has done or even that Arnav is doing this marriage under pressure. Unless his father is also like Sheetal

    Raj Mathur has to know that Sheetal and her tantrums have cost Ayush a loyal man like Shashi leaving his business. When someone who holds such an important position for 40yrs quits it has repercussions on the business. If he continues to give into Sheetal and her wishes his own business would face a downfall.
    If they snap ties Arnav will still handle Raizadas as an employee but what will Mathur do? Is Sheetal capable of handling i5s fallout because no matter what even if Revati does emotional blackmail Arnav won't marry Sheetal. He has taken this decision after figuring all the things. Plus he knows Revati is looking for personal interests and he has done enough already.

    Ayush had no business talking to Khushi and asking her to prove by marrying Akash. If he is so sure about Arnav liking Sheetal he wouldn't need Khushi to be married. So he always showed we pay you salary but paying salary doesn't give Ayush right to dictate Khushi and her personal life.

    Ayush knows they have gone too far. If they really push Arnav he'd leave their business too and go to UK with Khushi forever and Revati can find someone else to run their business like Arnav.

    I think Ayush is worried about Arnav leaving his business too.

    PS. Please write about the night that Khushi remembers and what Arnav felt about her then. Its mentioned in passing but it'd be nice if you wrote the flashback.

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  26. Madhu, first of all I would like to commend you for being a wonderful writer who can easily diversify into any kind of concept and make the readers glued to that. My thoughts about this -

    You should never forget from where we come from or our roots and I am happy that Arnav does still have that - he is considering himself as a common man, and not the adopted son of the Raizada’s. I think this is main reason for Arnav to be successful, as he has not forgotten how he was struggling before Raizada’s adopted him. I am not sire if he is even aware of his biological parents , whether they are alive or not, but some how I have a feeling that Ayush is somehow related to Arnav, not just by adoption, and somehow that is the main reason for Revathy being distant to Arnav. Anyways I would wait for you to unfold Arnav’s story prior to adoption

    I agree that Arnav needs to have some gratitude towards his parents who have adopted him and gave him a better life.
    But that doesn’t mean that he has to always agree to their wishes. He should voice out his feelings as well and see how they would react, and I am happy he has taken a step towards the same after Khushi showing him the mirror.

    Khushi should leave to London with knowing about Arnav’s breakup, and she can hear the news through the media but she should not be coming back to India. She has done everything so far to win her love but and now she should wait until Arnav confesses and wins her heart.
    Khushi is hurt very badly as he meant everything to her and she meant nothing to him. I am sure Akash will be there to lessen her grief/pain.

    Now that Arnav has broken his engagement with Sheetal. He needs to set right couple of things.. first is his mother - Revathy, he needs to inform her about his break-up with Sheetal, and also tell Revathy what he feels about them and why he has been a obedient son complying with their wishes, but he never got the motherly love from her.
    Second is needs to break the news to Mathur’s and apologise, and I am sure Aman would stand by Arnav and support him. He also needs to talk to Shashi Gupta, apologise for what ever happened so far taking the complete blame on him and make Shashi take back the resignation,.

    Arnav had taken Khushi for granted and hurt her for so many years, but still she forgave him and was hoping that he will hear to his heart. It is now only he is seeing what he is loosing and taken a step towards rectifying it. I am sure he will be angered to see that Khushi has returned the cheque and also left to London without meeting him. He needs to go to London and win Khushi’s love and it will not be easy to get her love back. Being in London, he can as well sort out the implications of his break-up with Sheetal, and in all this I am sure Ayush will be lending his hand to make sure Arnav gets his love. I am happy that Ayush is standing by his son and want him to have a friendly chat with Arnav to figure out where he was lagging in his love to him, as Arnav never told him about his feelings or anything for that matter. I hope with this chat, they share a more stronger bond.

    This is my perspective, but waiting for your updates to unfold these stories.. I feel you should just have two active stories at a time, as it is really frustrating at times to wait for the updates for each of these stories when you leave us in cliffhanger - RealityTruth ( IF user)

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  27. I forgot about Akash

    Even if Akash loves Khushi which doesn't seem love yet it doesn't matter because Khushi won't love him back

    If Khushi really wanted to play the jealousy game she would have agreed to marry Aakash and not decide to go to London. She thinks Arnav doesn't love her at this point though she knows he does and she has loved him a lot and knows his circumstances and didn't want to bring him any pain so she won't do anything to make him jealous or hurt. She thinks he paid to get her away from him. Why would he pay to get her a good education when Arnav could easily broken her heart in other ways if she stayed back.

    So it's best she leaves for London takes time off from the mess that is happening here.

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  28. Khushi should definitely go to London not to teach arnav a lesson but I want to see how much arnav can do to gain his love back how desperate he can be to win khushis love.but before that he should definitely resolve the issue between raizada n mehetas I'm saying it only for ayush because whatever his motive was to adopt him but he gave him a shelter n secure life when he was suffering n he somewhere really love arnav in that sense I will say arnav should resolve the issue first.after reading ur POV on arnav life I kind of feel arnav was not totally wrong in his place the life he is leading till now its all because of raizada so felt indebted towards them that's why he never want to disobey them want to make them happy though he was unhappy n now I feel any1 would have done the same if he/she was in arnav place.but still I want arnav khushis little separation I will not mind if akash gets Lil friendly towards khushi because I always like possessive ASR😉.but I don't want akash to turn in villain innocent flitting is OK.about revati let's see how she react after knowing the truth.

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  29. Kushi did enough to show her love towards him,now his turn to clear the mess and we want to see jealous arnav

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  30. First thing.. we need to know entire 22nd birthday flashback. Khushi should leave to London.but before that separation I think arnav and Khushi have another meeting as closure. Arnav should get to know about cheque and let Khushi know that he broke the engagement. Khushi should let him know that he broke her. Coming to Akash I want him to become best friend of Khushi. Yes would love to see burning Singh raizada but please no love angle between Akash and Khushi. Aman should take a stand for arnav in front of Raj and sheetal.
    Coming to arnav mother need to know more about the adoption because I couldn't gauge her non-attachment.

    First arnav should settle the AR mess here and should have vent his heart to his parents. Then become a lover boy and woo his lady in both arnav way and ASR way.

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    1. Everyone wants to know abt the birthday night.. and that makes me nervous now. Lol. Will push that scene in the upcoming parts soon

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  31. Revati is selfish. .arrogant .. Self-centred.. .She may be the real Mom of Arnav..she was pregnant. .but didn't want to be a mother at that time..due to some medical problem she couldn't go for abortion ..and our Hero was born to her...but didn't want to keep the baby..hence baby Arnav was kept in a orphanage...few years later Revati desperately wanted a child...but she couldn't. ..during those day they met Arnav and adopted their own child....In this whole process Mr Raizada has no role..because he was helplessly in love with his wife...So, he acted as a spineless...

    Madhu u r wonderful writter..I like ur writings . I would like to read this story in your way
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  32. I wish first arnav should talk to sheetal's dad n explain him why he did this.n Mr. Mathur to understand arnav n let him go... Then arnav has to go n start to woo kushi by some little antics n cute talk ...n remind her all the past good memories (recreating the moment type)... Oh!! I love to see lovey dovey asr...
    Between Wat happened on 22nd birthday???

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  33. I think khushi will not go to London,something will stop her.As far as Arnav is concerned,well he's got his father's back now so whatever mess is there with business that'll be sorted and on Mathur's side he has the vote of Aman.Arnav and Revati might have a confrontation.I strongly feel that they need Arnav badly,so it's the couple that has to bend down and not Arnav.The way i look at it he seems to be in a powerful position.First,he has refused to be the shareholder and heir to the Raizada property.Secondly if the couple really wanted to have or adopt a child they wouldn't count the favours they have bestowed upon him.That will be purely selfish on their part.Not to mention Arnav is 'the hen'that lays the golden egg.And lastly,khushi doesn't need Raizada tag.she loves 'Arnav' for who and what he is,not the 'Singh Raizada' in him.
    Now it's Arnav Vs khushi.That is going to be a very lovely,emotional,beautiful ,intense,passionate and intimate tale of how Arnav wins her back.

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  34. I think Khushi will go to London now because the reason for Arnav to break the engagement is not that he is having feelings for Khushi but also that he want his wife to be should lead simple life which definately Sheetal won't do and hence engagement broke. Making Revathi agreeto accept Khushi should not be difficult as Ayush is good at convincing the Revathi.Regarding the business mess, it will definately take time and will definately create mess in either of relationships which Arnav having,
    May be with his mother
    Ayush relationship with his Mathur friend and business
    I am sure Madhu like always you will take the story in good way which you always surprised us and given more reason to love your Arshi stories.waiting for next update.
    We fans really appreciate your effort in getting our feedback on storyline and considering them.Thankyou

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  35. Actually wat happened between them on that day is still a mystery....
    I understand that Arnav had gone through so much in childhood and he is thankful towards his adoptive family...but in that aim he made decisions and ignored his own feelings....but see wat happened finally... He created a mess....he should have talked to his father atleast...Anyway it's happened we can't change it now....Now wat is going to happen he needs to solve it....and khushi already decided to leave him...and I want her to go...she is heartbroken and she needs a break...and Arnav...I don't think he can leave everything a go behind her because he needs to clear the mess he created and I don't think sheetal will make it easy for Arnav and Revati Raizada...Her reaction will be obvious that she will blame khushi....

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  36. I don’t want akash with Khushi.. she doesn’t need him because she is strong person.. why is Revathi cold mother towards Arnav.. why did they Adopt Arnav.. .. plz don’t separate arshi .. really can’t see both separated plz

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  37. I am really confused about Revati. Yes she is class concious, arrogant but don't think she doesn’t love Arnav. Beecause, i remember, when they all get to know that Arnav had fever and next morning Sheetal came, Revati told Sheetal that sge had to be careful what she is putting in Arnav's food as he is diabetic. I think in a way she loves him also.
    About Arnav-Khushi situation, before going to London they must have a heart to heart talk. Khushi should know about Arnav's stand and should let him know, still she is hurt the way Arnav behaved and need time to settle her life first. Till now, khushi lived her life for Arnav only, now she gad to live her life for herself. After all the mess Arnav created, he should let her go and fix this mess first.

    About Akash- Khushi situation: please let them be friends only and let Aakash be only Aman's way to make Arnav realize about his feelings. There is already many mess. We don't need another one in the form of heart broken Aakash. However, Arnav doesn’t necessarily need to know that 😉. We could use some jealousy and possessiveness from Arnav 😃.

    Don't know about Mehta's. Aaman would surely support hus friends but don't know enough about others. Sheetal would definitely try to sue them and take her revenge and that may get Revati stand against Arnav.
    I am feeling Arnav is going to face some harsh realities in future. Already feeling sad for him. His love will leave him, one of his parents may stand against him, which will definitely break him.

    At first, you portrayed that Khushi is the only one who understands Arnav most. So please in future keep the characters in find while portraying Khushi. I want her to get away from Arnav to find herself not find Arnav's replacement in Aakash or anyone else.

    On a different note, Arnav should start something on his own. Untill he is under Raizada tag it will be difficult for him to take any decisions that goes against them. Especially if Sheetal is really going to sue Raizada's and Mathur's opt out for the ties, Raizada's will face monetary loss, which will increase Arnav's guilt.

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  38. 1. Why was Arnav adopted? I always thought because Raizada couple was childless and they adopted a kid who in need a shelter. Is it something so deep to think? Specially ayush. Revati never seems like a mother to me. I don’t know sis.

    2. Why is Revati so distant from him? Because she thinks Arnav as an adopted kid. Not as a real mother. I said this earlier too sis. I’m sure you have watched Kabhi khushi kabhi gum right? There how that couple behaved with that adopted child and why? Because they wanted a kid and they loved him dearly. That love that affection cannot be seen in Revati. If she is a good mother or has a little affection to him we could have seen it somewhere right? But I have seen such an affection for him. She just flaunt her pride and status to Arnav.

    3. Does the couple have another child? I don’t think so. If so why would Revati use Arnav like that? She cannot even show some affection to Arnav. Then that child might not be normal. That’s my only guess.

    4. Who are Arnav's real parents? Are they alive? I have no idea for this. And I don’t want to think that deep. It can be a twist or a surprise. Doesn’t matter.

    I know I have called Arnav a spineless man/ coward. I accept it. I feel bad sometimes because I love him. I took his side first and blamed khushi. But he doesn’t want to clear himself up with khushi. He did a mistake. He gave a hope to Khushi. And then he started to reject her. He should have made him understand and end it if he wanted to pay his gratitude to his foster parents. I’m not angry with him for deciding to marry sheetal. But I’m angry with him because he gave hopes and without clearing them he just pushed Khushi away and she got carried it away thinking that he will someday give up and love her. She was a kid when that night happened. I mean a teenager right. So it obvious that she would fall in love with him so deeply.

    1. Will she come to know of his breakup with Sheetal? Will that stop her from going back to London? May be she wil come to know? But the question is does it matter now? Because I think she needs a break and even if she gets to know she should go back to London for some time.

    2. What do you think should be Arnav's next actions to sort the web of relationships he has created? Should he chase Khushi to London? Or settle the dust first which he has spilled on their professional ties with Mathurs? I think he should clear all the mess before starting his love story. I don’t know he can decide according to the situation. His first step is done. He told Sheetal about his feeling for Khushi and even about his inheritance.

    3. What major role is Aman yet have to play between the Raizadas- Mathurs- Guptas- Sharmas? I thought he would help Arnav but he did so little and I expected more from him. He just triggered jealousy in him. He had been there for Khushi. Not much but a little.

    4. Is Akash genuinely interested in Khushi Gupta? I don’t think so. If he did we could have guessed by his first gestures.

    5. Will Akash - Khushi bond take a different angle to burn Arnav Singh Raizada? May be. Can’t predict.

    6. Who will Raj Mathur support? His son's affinity towards the Raizadas? His own friendship with Ayush? Or his revengeful Daughter? It’s so early to tell sis. Because we haven’t seen how Raj Mathurs character is.

    7. Will Arnav - Revati relationship get more tangled? Hope so. She never support Arnav in anyway and she will blame Arnav for everything. She is just a self-centered woman. And I don’t even want her to be good in the future too. She is not a nice woman anyway.

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    1. P.S. Revati had taken care of Arnav. But honestly I didn't feel her love towards Arnav. I feel Ayush's feeling for Arnav in the story. He is trying to be a father at least. my point is if she loved Arnav a bit she wouldn't have pushed Arnav for a marriage which can benefited her.

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  39. Hi Madhu it's so sad to see dat I was late fr this chat.....😭😭....
    This is 1 of my favourite ff.....

    1. Plz publish the flashback of arnuv were he disclosed his feelings for khushi......

    2. Let khushi go back to London... even akash is a London based..... let akash and khushi be friends.... and let akash play the cupid....
    Plz send arnuv to london to woo back khushi..... make him feel jealous when akash talks to khushi or when she is comfortable in akash bonding....

    3. Let ayush explain to revati the pros and cons of not marrying sheetal and marrying khushi.....

    4. Let ayush aman help in helping arnuv bringing back khushi....
    5.after the air of tension decreases let ayush ask forgiveness from Shashi....

    6. Raj as a father must under the feelings let him take the correct steps donot let him support Sheetal.... but he should make sheetal realize dat force love donot lasts.....

    7. When arnuv will come to know that khushi left fr Londin let him frst clear the fog dat he created by clarifying with Raj.... and den let him leave fr London.... hope...
    When he leaves fr London aman be with him... I think he can play a good cupid fr them....

    8. Ya arnuv parents we are also not aware...
    I doubt dat is the whole property of Arnuv and he might be the son of Revati sister... who fr greed must have killed her sister and husband...
    Payal is not here till now is payal the hidden daughter of Revati wch we are still not aware.....

    Shabih

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  40. Still..that moment when he didn't even recognise her..5 or 6 years won't change that much, that confirms he wasn'teven thinking about her

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  41. Arnav is going through a pain ful situation..first he should clear all this mess.. Arnav also feels for kushi..but his circumstances made him to avoid Kushi..He is a silent lover, good at heart..always sacrifices everything for his adopted parents... Kushi knew him since her childhood.. how a simple and innocent person Arnav is.. so this mess which created now is not just arnav's fault, Kushi equally responsible for it.. so Kushi should support Arnav in this situation and then they together solve these problems and then only they can be happy with each other and their family

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  42. The avoideing tendency dat revati have fr arnuv is cz hes not his child....

    Arnuv and revati relation are always tangled now its tym to open the tangled relationship into a better 1..... she must realize dat she was never with her son when he needed....

    Let ayush create a scene where revati realizes sheetal was with arnuv only fr property not fr his love... and khushi vice versa....

    Let arnuv confess to khushi dat he broke with sheetal and he is in London to take her back home.....

    Arnuv parents alive may be may not be.... it can be a twist like ayush adopted him from 1 of his poor friends cz revati was not able to conceive and ayush must have feed him so much money dat dey donot demand Arnuv again.... revati dies not have close relationship with arnuv as a mom bcz he 2as from a poor family....
    And revati hates poor.....

    Plz- let khushi go back to London and in London when arnuv visits den she should come to know about his breakup....

    Hope arnuv received the cheque

    Plzzz I want to see khushi very strong and determined.... let arnuv realizes the true meaning of love

    When arnuv will leave India revati will be alone den she will realizes her motherly effect and den she will have the love fr Arnuv


    Shabih

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  43. Knowing arnav he might wants to sell the things first but I hope ayush sent him to woo his lady love..

    Aman helps him..

    Sheetal wont be quite not revati too...hope ayush, aman handle them and let arnav foucu on khushi..

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  44. it will be very interesting..Arnav will be quite about Khushi for now unless khusho getting marry soon because he got uphill battle with his mother and AR and mathurs too. lets wait and watch how you

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  45. Khushi tried a lot to win Arnav's heart and to change his mind. Arnav's perspective also is not worng. but now its time for him to make a decision. I want khushi to return back to London and start her new life. But Akash should be a best friend, not fiancee. There in India, Arnav must clean all mess, clear all problems with his adoptive parents, maybe with his mother as well as Aman;s family. and then come to LOndon to win Khushi's heart. if Arnav's mom still ceeates a problem, he can leave them and start his business apart. and then maybe after 2 years, Arshi meet.

    waiting for your update eagerly :)

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  46. I wish khushi go back to London. Start her life can be friend with Akash but not more then friends. Arnav needs to sort out all the mess and needs to talk with both the parents and Revati opinion and her feelings comes out to open let’s see what’s you decided waiting for update I loved the way you express and write.

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  47. Thanks madhu you have expressed about Arnav same as I got him fro the very beginning it’s hard for this boy who is adopted but now he is listening to his heart though it had created a mess but I m sure he also have capability of clearing it too… reveti is a selfish mother he shouldn’t care more for her … now he should talk talk to shashi about his feeling for khushi and make him believe that he will never hurt her and win her love … aman will help Arnav clearing all mess …

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  48. Firstly,Arnav doesnt share a healthy understanding relationship with his adopted parents.Though they are all staying under roof, there is no love filled moments between them.As the Raizadas are more concerned abt their status in society and the growing popularity of theirs in the so called Elite society.
    Maybe because of the peer pressure, they had adopted Arnav as their son.
    Now Sheethal wont sit quiet after Arnavs bold confession.She will twist his words and convey to Revathi Raizada.
    Also she say that Khushi had intentionally joined AR to grab Arnavs attention and also to break their bond.
    This would defintely increase Revathis hatred towards Khushi.To prove her point, she would outrageously reject Khushi and force Arnav to see some other woman as his Soulmate.
    Every child must be grateful towards their parents.And Arnav is extra grateful towards his parents as they had given a life n an identity to a person like him.Even if he forcefully marries Khushi, he would support his parents wholly at critical times.As his views are oscillating between Gratitude and Love towards Khushi.
    Also, he should in India to sort out the mess at the moment.His prime concern is to have a clean talk with Raj Mathur.Also he should personally confess abt his love and the inability to give space to any other woman in this birth.He should marry only with his parents wish and blessings.By this way, he would be able to standby his wife without any guilt, gratitude in the future.
    As a brother Aman Mathur should get angry at first.But would feel happy that Arnavs step had saved the upcoming embrassment in Sheetals as well in their lives.Rah Mathur would burst like a volcano and would support Sheetal.
    But he shouldnt allow his Father or Sister to play with Arnavs reputation or hamper the growth of AR or to splash mud in Khushis life.
    Lastly, Khushi should be financially independent and take care of Shashi Gupta and Her Buaji at the moment.Infact they all should shift to London immediately.Also she shouldnt marry someone to prove a point and spoil that persons life.She shouldnt forgive Arnav that easily too!.If Arnav could have explained his views and had asked her for some buffer time, this mess could have been avoided.Falling in love with someone is not in ones hand.
    Secondly, she shouldnt marry ARNAV WITHOUT THE CONSENT OF THE ARROGANT REVATHY RAIZADA.LET KHUSHI MAKE AN IDENTITY FOR HERSELF FIRSTLY.SHE SHOULD BE SO STRONG ENOUGH TO SMASH THE FACES OF SHEETAL AND REVATHY RAIZADA.

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  50. Hi Di!

    I am silent reader and reading all of your stories from a long time, the way you Penn down each story is marvelous.I am very thankful for providing such a wonderful stories.

    I couldn't stop myself in letting you know this particular story was the most favorite one of mine.I don't wish to comment on the story is gonna progress because I am 100% sure that you are going to give us mindblowing parts.

    Thank you di once again. I wish you always stay happy and blessed

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  51. Arnavs' not spineless or weak..he's an emotional person who gives his obligation towards parents priority over many things because he might have never thought that he could become the adoptive child of raizadas nor the comforts of life he is getting now when he had become an orphan..
    In arnavs' case the above mentioned 4 questions are mysteries...
    N m curious about the 4th question what connection does raizadas have with arnav....I feel there's a connection..
    Regarding Khushi...
    1. Arnav ko bohot se papad belne padenge as Khushi tut chuki hai ...
    7.arnav-revati relationship was basically one sided from arnav... bas..that lady is a drama queen so dramaebaazi is for sure..but she's also the one who suggested arnav to inform Sheetal about his lifestyle...n Sheetal brokeup on that...so she don't have a say here....
    6.papa Mathur will support his daughter I think as girls are Papa's princess:) atleast some are..
    5.maybe Khushi will make arnav have his own medicine by bonding with Aakash..
    4.aakash is a stranger here I mean he's not much detailed in this story but as much as his character is shown he's trying to impress Khushi,easy going..erc ..so don't have an answer
    3.mystery
    2.arnav should make everyone see the big picture why he declared his love for Khushi before Sheetal n then after settling everything he should go for Khushi otherwise it can create problems...but in anger people don't understand the words said...
    Nice questions...

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  52. I must confess I started to read the story after a few chapters, so haven't read it from the beginning.

    Now having read your noe, i can understand and empathize with Arnav and understand why he was not willing to go against his adoptive parents. So I shal take back a lot of my comments about him. They have him a life no matter what their motivation & I can imagine he must feel indebted.

    Having said that, obligation is never a great basis of a marriage and I am glad he had realized this.

    I do think Khushi should go to london. Not a tit-for-tat or to make arnav run after her. I just think it will be easier for the Raizadas to sort out the tangles they are in, without lhushi's presence which will make sheetal even more vengeful.

    One that is on a path to recovery, only then can both of them give the attention to their relationship that it deserves

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  53. OMG Di. So many facets to unfold. I would like khushi to irritate asr more now and aman supporting khushi.

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  54. Hi Madhu it's so sad to see dat I was late fr this chat.....😭😭....
    This is 1 of my favourite ff.....

    1. Plz publish the flashback of arnuv were he disclosed his feelings for khushi......

    2. Let khushi go back to London... even akash is a London based..... let akash and khushi be friends.... and let akash play the cupid....
    Plz send arnuv to london to woo back khushi..... make him feel jealous when akash talks to khushi or when she is comfortable in akash bonding....

    3. Let ayush explain to revati the pros and cons of not marrying sheetal and marrying khushi.....

    4. Let ayush aman help in helping arnuv bringing back khushi....
    5.after the air of tension decreases let ayush ask forgiveness from Shashi....

    6. Raj as a father must under the feelings let him take the correct steps donot let him support Sheetal.... but he should make sheetal realize dat force love donot lasts.....

    7. When arnuv will come to know that khushi left fr Londin let him frst clear the fog dat he created by clarifying with Raj.... and den let him leave fr London.... hope...
    When he leaves fr London aman be with him... I think he can play a good cupid fr them....

    8. Ya arnuv parents we are also not aware...
    I doubt dat is the whole property of Arnuv and he might be the son of Revati sister... who fr greed must have killed her sister and husband...
    Payal is not here till now is payal the hidden daughter of Revati wch we are still not aware.....


    The avoideing tendency dat revati have fr arnuv is cz hes not his child....

    Arnuv and revati relation are always tangled now its tym to open the tangled relationship into a better 1..... she must realize dat she was never with her son when he needed....

    Let ayush create a scene where revati realizes sheetal was with arnuv only fr property not fr his love... and khushi vice versa....

    Let arnuv confess to khushi dat he broke with sheetal and he is in London to take her back home.....

    Arnuv parents alive may be may not be.... it can be a twist like ayush adopted him from 1 of his poor friends cz revati was not able to conceive and ayush must have feed him so much money dat dey donot demand Arnuv again.... revati dies not have close relationship with arnuv as a mom bcz he 2as from a poor family....
    And revati hates poor.....

    Plz- let khushi go back to London and in London when arnuv visits den she should come to know about his breakup....

    Hope arnuv received the cheque

    Plzzz I want to see khushi very strong and determined.... let arnuv realizes the true meaning of love

    When arnuv will leave India revati will be alone den she will realizes her motherly effect and den she will have the love fr Arnuv

    Shabih

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  55. A lot of people have already given their opinion regarding the future of this story and I agree with most of the points. I know you will take the story forward beautifully, so yeah, the excitement level is so high. Please update the future chapters soon.

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