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Note on He Loves Me Not



I know most of you have been upset with my last post on He Loves Me Not. I did read a few comments and realized that.


1. Story dragged

2. No romance between leads

3. Turned into a Family drama

4. Arnav’s birth secret not fully out

5. No love factor anymore

6. Khushi’s love / passion for Arnav is no more seen

7. Cliff hanger


Etc.. Etc..


Okay!! So, do not argue between each other on this. The way I appreciate your support to me, I am also equally open to your criticism guys. So, that’s fine. No harsh feelings. Please don’t fight amongst yourself here for me!!


I will look into all of these issues and see how this fit with what I have in mind. I will work on it and come back with better updates. 😊

41 comments:

  1. It my most favorite story plz, update soon 😍🥰🥰😘

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  2. NO probs di. Whatever cults u give to story r awesome.

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  3. That's absolutely fine Madhu.. U continue as per ur plans.. The story is going good so far...

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  4. It's going fyn....i trust you completely

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  5. But what about Badtameez.. U haven't updated it since long.. I miss it as its my favourite story of urs currently

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  6. We appreciate your work too dear. And we are glad that you take our opinions seriously unlike other authors. We know what a fabulous writer you are. But we all love reading your fictions with Arshi Romance along with the other masala. Like family issues.. Thriller.. Fight.. Love hate.. But we thought this story despite being a romantic fiction was not having romance. Hence we were disappointed especially when we know what a fab writer you are. I'm sure you understood our feelings and hope to see more romance into this fiction.

    Love,

    Abby

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  7. There is no issues in the story, the way you are writing is fabulous. Please do write as you have planned

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  8. Sometimes Khaney mey Namak Mirch kam zyada hojhatha hey.
    That u may have a bit more Leftover food.
    Like
    Similar were the contents of the last update.
    That doesnt mean, the Chef or the Writer OR the food or the writing skill is bad.
    Empty stomach as well Over strained Mind are highly dangerous.

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  9. Thats okay madhu just plz show some romance plzzzzzz and update its part long plzzzz☺

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  10. Please write the way you want to. No problem from my side.

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  11. Actually everyone was giving their opinion how they felt after reading it but some think we bashing you...But that not true...We truly Love and appreciate your work Madhu...And since you start this fictions He Love Me Not i told you its been My Favourite...

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  12. Madhu..this the best thing about you..i always love the way you remain connected to your readers..be it appreciations or criticism, you are always an amazingly positive person...you are a wonderful writer & you very well know what you are writing.I always look forward to read your every update & whatever Twist & turn you bring to your story,you have always been beautifuly portraying them...hope to read more of your amazing creations in coming many more years.♥��

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  13. Im just wait to see arshi romance without any family prb or secrets between them . But im ok with your flow dear . Go according to your plan

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  14. You are a great writer and I always appreciate your writing. Your stories are great in every way. You know how I comment sister. I always write what I truly feel about the update. Even when everyone says it's good if it's not good for me I will write that. I'm really sorry if my comment hurt you sister. Forgive me if it's so. Actually in my point of view most of the readers were not bashing you it was our curiosity to know what was the secret which turned in to a frustration. Will love your stories no matter what 💓💓💓

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    1. Hey.. you don't have to feel sorry. please continue to write your honest opinions on the updates. I would appreciate that. 😀

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  15. Madhu it's one of my favorite as I can relate myself to it and I believe in you dear that u will give a very amazing turn to this story. I am just waiting for the moment...please update soon dear

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  16. I support your choice of story writing ...means its your baby and I believe you will never let it down ....I appreciate that you are entertaining us even in your busy schedule ....I know writing is your passion but still you always gave us importance ...I'm really grateful dear

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  17. Madhu, everyone's perspective will be different and we can't cater to or satisfy everyone. As a writer, it is your prerogative to depict the story in whatever way you have been thinking about the way to unfold. I would support you in whatever pace you want to unfold things. Pls go with your original thoughts, don't change anything based on these comments. You are an amazing writer, and it is great pleasure to read your stories, so pls don't change anything, its my request to go with the original plan. Thanks - Realitytruth(IF Userid)

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  18. But to be frank i never felt any of these.. I felt it as awesome as ur all your stories... Pls continue it the way u really wanted... I want ur essence...love you.. Thank you 😍😍😍😍

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  19. No worries 😉 Madhu. I love the way you bringing all your stories. Keep going 🥰 give us your best always.

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  20. There is no issues with the story. We linke the way you write.. . U continue ur story as per your thoughts .. Will wait for next update

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  21. Its myy favrt stryyy.... Alwys lv ur workkk....

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  23. Hey I don't think there is lack of romance at all...I le the slow pace at which their v relationship is progressing... given everything that has taken place before, it is silly to expect them to be all lovely dovesy... plus they are two mature individuals whi have been through an emotional upheaval...

    To me romance is not all about giving kissing, continuously saying I love you. . It is in this you do and share... ...and the is plenty of that...

    Though yeah, the mystery about Arnav's family id lov overdue.. but I can understand him trying to avoid talking about it

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    1. Sorry about all the typos... was writing in a moving car.... reposting below...


      Hey I don't think there is lack of romance at all...I like the slow pace at which their relationship is progressing... given everything that has taken place before, it is silly to expect them to be all lovely dovey... plus they are two mature individuals wh0 have been through an emotional upheaval...

      To me romance is not all about hugging, kissing, taking cheesy, continuously saying I love you. . It is reflected in what you do and share... ...and there is plenty of that...I hate those silly stories where every chapter is like a underdeveloped teen's idea of romance!

      Though yeah, the mystery about Arnav's family is a little overdue.. but I can understand him trying to avoid talking about it...

      AT the end of the day, it is your story, you are the author and you know best why you are doing what you are... I am good with the pace, the eagerness to know what happened with Arnav keeps us hooked!!

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    2. "given everything that has taken place before, it is silly to expect them to be all lovely dovey... plus they are two mature individuals wh0 have been through an emotional upheaval..."

      Exactly my thoughts. Thank you.

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  24. Di the way you want to write the story we love reading that and we will keep on reading too. Love you and waiting for your next update eagerly 🤗😄

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  25. No worries Madhu. I have read all your works... I know you will bring the best out in every story. Patience is what we need. The fruits of patience is bountiful.

    Keep writing. Life is not always lovey dovey... Family also plays a big role in our lives.

    Please continue... I will read it...

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  26. When will you update next part of badtameez? From last 2-3 parts you are delaying to update badtameez.

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  27. Hi
    No problem. We love your work. Every story will not be same. I actually loved it . The way it’s proceeding it’s good. You write along ur thoughts .
    Thanks for giving us wonderful ff of our fav Arshi

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