“Are you all serious?” Anjali growled. “I won’t let this woman stay with us again”
“Aarav can stay with me and Dad in Gupta Villa then” Khushi suggested
“That’s not happening. I am not leaving Aarav alone with you” Arnav argued.
“I think you should convince your sister then” Khushi debated.
“Convince my foot” Anjali shouted. “Dad, say something”
Ayush had heard enough of their bickering. Shashi too was pissed off by Anjali’s unnecessary taunting. He wanted his daughter to stay safe and it seemed impossible in Shantivan. Khushi stared at her father and read his worry but before she could do anything about it, Ayush decided to put an end to this argument.
“If Anjali has a problem letting Khushi stay in Shantivan and Arnav cannot send Aarav alone to Gupta Villa, then I suggest Arnav, Khushi and Aarav can stay at a different place for one month”
Arnav stared at his father for even suggesting so absurd. Even the thought of it burned his body.
“Khushi will stay with us in Shantivan for one month. That’s final” Arnav declared and slipped away.
Arnav stared at his father for even suggesting so absurd. Even the thought of it burned his body.
“Khushi will stay with us in Shantivan for one month. That’s final” Arnav declared and slipped away.
Note: As requested, I am posting another update of Yaadein tomorrow. And my Lawful Sins 2 readers, please dont be disappointed. I will update the Precap for Lawful Sins tonight instead.
Updating both FFs tomorrow seems impossible considering my other work loads. So please dont fight amongst each other and enjoy the Fictions :)
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EXCERPT
My mind goes into free fall. This is it? We have to part ways? So early? We had just started knowing each other. I want more time with him. I don’t want him to leave me. He slowly releases my hand.
“I .. I don’t want to go alone” I confess. My eyes have tears pooled in them. I hadn’t felt this attached to anyone so far, I am sure not even in my earthly life. He has given me a reason to think about someone so preciously like never before.
“Why should it end here?” I ask with pain in my voice.
“It doesn’t have to end, if you don’t want to” he answers with a weak smile on his lips.
I don’t understand his reply. He is leaving my hand and yet he is giving me a hope to be together? It is confusing. I can feel him withdrawing from me. I don’t understand what to do. The next instant, I wrap my arms around him and sob on his chest. He doesn’t scoop me. He stiffens, stays still and lets me cry. A strange emotion runs through me. I don’t want this to end ever.
Awesome thanks
ReplyDeleteYaadein again...Was expecting a Full Update of LawFul Sin2 tomorrow as many of us were waiting for this...Hope we get a Long Update when you post LawFul Sin2...
ReplyDeleteWho's disliking Comments here...if you dont like what i post...just GET LOST...
DeleteOh dear does a long update even matter now. It doesnot
DeleteThank you so much Madhu
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the update. Something is fishy with Anjali, she has something to do with Khushi in the past nad she is worried if Khushi gains her consciousness back she will spill the beans. I really wander what that is though. Why is Anjali so anxious with Khushi being around? Hope we get an answer to that soon. Thank you once again for updating yaadein tomorrow.
Hai. I am from kerala. I like all your works. I am a big fan of you. Thanku for the precap of yaadein....
ReplyDeleteThank you!!!
ReplyDeleteThanku so so much for considering our request...awesome precap..waiting for full update
ReplyDeleteThank you for the update, suspect Anjali in Kushi's accident.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the full Update😍😘. Though I was waiting for Lawful Sins2.But OK😘.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the precap .. update anything which u drafted Madhu ..no issues. One has a right to request .. please everyone stop this fight. One day every story will come to end . Please don't fight and make it difficult for Madhu .
ReplyDeleteHey madhu your works are awesome keep going on sista
ReplyDeleteI am happy with both updates but please update Longone
ReplyDeletehy madhu di!!! i am your follower since you started writing on facebook.I really applaud you for coming up with these great ideas that we being the reader can't help to re-read your story again and again. You must have worked hard to give us daily updates and i being a rookie writer myself on wattpad i know how hard it is to write that too regularly. Great job di. So dont worry that you cant give two updates in a day. Just keep doing the great work!!!
ReplyDeleteAnjali is behind arshi misunderstanding. Hope arnav get to know about truth before one month end.
ReplyDeleteAwesome awesome... Thanks for updating another part precap madhu... Seems anjali is hiding something from past.. Arnav and khushi going to stay together for month.. 😊😊😊😊.. Waiting for full update...
ReplyDeleteNo need to update lawful sins on Thursday too
ReplyDeleteGo with yaadein again
Im stupid i wasted my day
*Holding Mic*
DeleteYou've been april fooled. How does it feel Ma'am? ������
this person is totally at another level...commenting and then liking her own comments multiple times to make her opinion count..Gosh!!
DeleteNice
ReplyDeleteOH WOW
ReplyDeleteTHIS DID NOT HAPPEN
NO
NOPESSSSS!!!
Madhu do you think its fair on your part to do this on last minute
ReplyDeleteDisappointed in you
Yes like we are all in you for being so petty. Jab tumhare pasand ka story ek saath do din update ho to waah wahai ab ek din delay ho to uske piche hath dhoke pad gaye. Sharam karo yar thoda
DeleteDon't come at me. I didn't ask for a double update then and she re-uploaded because she hadn't drafted yaadeim that. She did put that in note.
DeleteThen also she had put up a note saying most of her readers asked for the same story to be updated next day as well and today also she has done the same. The only difference is then it was lawful sins update and you were happy today its yaadein causing the disappointment for you. But if you were happy then why not let the other people be happy rn
DeleteThere were 3 4 people who asked for update. I was shocked why did she even re-upload it was yaadein's turn. Now im sad because we have been put aside at last minute.
DeleteBut of course be happy its for you to be happy . I have a right to my displeasure here too
everyone here don't need to fight when she clearly mentioned that it will short story with 20 chapters maybe and after that it will lawful sins only it's matter about few days only you just need to enjoy both stories on updated times
DeleteAwesome precap. Awaiting for the full update. Can't wait to read the Lawful Sins 2 precap. Not an issue about the full update, can wait for a day more. Thanks for being so much interactive and responsive towards the readers 😍.
ReplyDeleteYadin lawful sins both my lavable updates . Honestly i expecting this both updates . But this impossble i know . Thank you for giving such a soulful stories . Thank you mathu you are great...
ReplyDeleteMadhu u r soooo sweet.love u di.thanks a lot
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Madhu you give precap of next update a day before. It will be no different. Are you trying to placate us with "But i will give you a precap of lawful sins dont worry"
ReplyDeletethank you veryyy muccchhh giving again the update of Yaadein. We will we waiting for the update.
ReplyDeleteI don't know why people are reacting like this.on that day madhu has given double updates of lawful sins.now she is giving yaadein double updates.so equal equal.madhu whatever you are doing is correct.dont mind.thank you.
ReplyDelete-shwetha
Disappointed Reders,
ReplyDeleteDon't check blog till Thursday and BAMMMMMMMMMM You will see lawful sins.
Chill & dont worry
I just hope Khushi gets her memories back... I know it might take time though... Waiting to know if arshi's relationship progresses in this one month or Arnav keeps hating Khushi like this...
ReplyDeleteTo all the readers here the ones who are disappointed with Madhu right now for updating yaadein tomorrow and those who are happy to get an update of your choice.. guys we are all here ultimately for ARSHI, the couple we love so much that we have been reading about them even after all these years of the serial ending. Be it lawful sins, yaadein or any other story for that matter we are here solely because of our love for Arnav and Khushi. So can you all please stop fighting over which story is being updated? I know it was supposed to be lawful sins day tomorrow I was also waiting for it eagerly in the hope that we will finally get read about Arnav's past but its fine ya we can wait for a day more. We have had days when she was very busy and we went days without any update but right now she is updating daily so can we just be grateful for that and keep the fights aside? I mean think about her she works hard on her job and also in providing us these entertaining stories so cant we just cut her some slack, let her update what she has drafted and be happy with it? Is it too much to ask for?
ReplyDeleteExactly. I don’t understand why they are fighting. If we get to read about Arshi that’s all matters. We have to be grateful that Mashu di is still writing for us. Next time sis update only one story until it ends. So no one can fight about their favorite story.
DeleteTo all those complaining lawful sins got a double update it was because she had not drafted yaadein that day and had lawful sins to upload.
ReplyDeleteBecause some are shouting
DeleteNote: Posting another update of this FF tomorrow as some of you requested. :)
That's the note she had put up there. She said people requested hence she is giving double update just like she did today. So you can also stop shouting now.
3 4 people asked for re update. Are they enough for a writer to convince with a re update? No right. She uploaded because she had not drafted yaadein
DeleteThat was what she uploaded as her note dear i did not make that up. Whereas I didnt see her mentioning not having yaadein drafted anywhere. Sorry.
DeleteNice. Did Anjali is the one who pushed Kkg way back?
ReplyDeleteAll the 3 story are going so good so yes update whichever you can..
ReplyDeleteSeems like anjali or sheetal are behind all the mishap in arshi life?
God. What is going on here? 🙄🙄🙄
ReplyDeleteI don't understand the readers here are adults or teenagers. No offence to the readers but u guys are being childish. I love your writing Madhu.so whatever you update for us. As long as I get to read a chapter of any of ur FF once a day It releases my stress and makes me happy.peace
DeleteIt seems like ww3 is about to begin here amongst the readers Madhu. I don't understand why is everyone getting so hyper
DeleteMadhu please update whatever u want . Those who want to read will read it. Those who don't want can ignore and read only when there favourite story is updated
DeleteExactly sis. I have never seen such fights. This is hilarious 😂
Deletethere is only one person who is creating this ruckus by displaying her displeasure and disrespecting others in a very immature way....Ignore this kind of negativity and update whatever you have drafted madhu will greedily lap up whatever comes in my way cos i really enjy reading ur stories
DeleteMadhu stop giving double update on any story even if u drafted next chapter of same story don't update it. Only update in a row so that these ppl will stop fighting
ReplyDeletePls post lawful sins precap
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Deletewow madhu this just made my day one full updt two precaps yayy....can tomorrow come already.....THANK U for your lovey gesture madhu
ReplyDeleteMadhu Baby, I am straight and a girl...let me clear that first. But I have never fallen in love with any other writer the way I have fallen for you! I am reading these fights and triple entertaining myself here -your current superb stories, reading completed ones nth time and then this - Comedy Nights. God, I have hit jackpot!!!
ReplyDeleteReally, really love you. Don't worry, update whenever whatever is ready and you are comfortable with. At the end of day, we are your loyal readers.
Tumse hi din hota hai, surmayi shaam aati hai...tumse hi...
(It is effect of reading your stories for 9 years)
Hahah 😁😄 i agree with u tum se hi din hota hai, tu sa hi shaam aati hai tumse hi 😘🌹madhu😍 i love ur every story ❤👌 update what is ready and whatever u what u r the writer
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DeleteSo, khushi going to stay with arnav for next one month.
ReplyDeleteI don't like this anjali here.
Question, did she got married after the broke marriage.
Some really big mystery is hiding behind the story of all the abort and running away with aarav thing.
Is she ever going to get her memory back?
Thanks for precap
Awesome
ReplyDeleteHey give freedom to writer. They too have personal life. We shouldn't pressurize , it will affect their life. Madhu don't bother about these things, just update whatever you want. Everything you wrote and writing are awesome stories.
ReplyDeleteTo the ones who are expressing their displeasure in not seeing their favorite stories, you have the freedom to express is provided you express it in a respectful manner.
ReplyDeleteAlso,, end of the day it's all her story. So why not just enjoy Arshi and chill! It's hard to find passionate people still writing after almost a decade of the serial. So pls keep in mind the author's personal life too.
Meanwhile I enjoy all stories and will gladly read whatever is posted. Win win situation for me. 💃💃
Hey di what matters is you are updating .Happy for that. Do it as per ur convenience.Good Luck .ALways wait for ur updates .
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ReplyDeleteAwesome precap.. hope they stay separate in some other home as Ayush suggested😁
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