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Bride of Sheesh Mahal - Season 3 - Part 53


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Chapter 53


Khushi’s POV


The Raizada family had joined me too when I received the video call from Nandakishore. We all wanted to see how they trap Chandrika and make her reveal the way to break the spell. But now realizing Arnav has lost the Raksha Dhaaga from his arm and is now transformed into that evil blue-eyed version of him which Chandrika is controlling, I start losing hope. NK keeps the phone in a way where we can witness what is happening there while he continues to fight with Arnav who punches Akash hard.

“Bhai, don’t..” Akash pleads but nothing works.

NK tries to stop Chandrika from continuing chanting the mantras but she pushes him away with a force that hurts his leg. Mohan sets himself free and soon starts hitting NK. The scene is a mess.

“Oh my God. What is happening there?” Daadi screams as she sees the live video of Arnav who is now hurting NK whereas Akash is dealing with Mohan, trying to overpower him.

Chandrika is busy chanting the dark mantras to give more power to this blue-eyed version of Arnav who is beating NK furiously. Though NK is trying to defend himself, Arnav is too powerful.

“Somebody do something..” Daadi shouts again, crying witnessing the scene before her.

Payal and her father and my Babuji are doing the Maha Puja to let Devi Maiyaa’s blessings on our family whereas Sheetal is on call with Shyam asking him to speed up reaching Kali Bawdi with the police for additional support and get the situation under control. Though I don’t think it will be of any help. My vision blurs by the tears flowing continuously from my eyes. Ten more minutes and the lunar eclipse will fall. None of us know what would be the consequences of that. Even if Chandrika now gets arrested, will I lose my husband forever to her dark magic? No.. I can’t lose hope. The spell has to be broken and I’m ready to do everything in my power to ensure that happens. Blood… Chandrika or Arnav’s blood.. At the same spot where the spell was casted. That’s the only way to break it. How? How? And while I stare at the phone screen which is still showing the live video of how Arnav is physically hurting his brothers, I try not to let that heart shattering scene divert my mind. Anjali.. She has Chandrika’s bloodline.. But she is not here. She’s under medical supervision in police custody. I can’t bring her here.. I cry the hell out for being so miserable at the moment. My whole world is coming crashing down and I can’t save it from the doom. I can’t..

Hey Devi Maiyaa. Please show me a way..

And just when I shut my eyes, I see my mother’s image before my eyes. My mother? Chandrika’s twin.. Same Bloodline..

Without a second thought, I run outside, as fast as I can towards the garage where the secret room is. The place where Chandrika had casted the spell decades ago. It was time I, the bride of Sheesh Mahal puts an end to it.


I fumble with the key to that room, the one which my mother had left for me. Probably her premonitions had shown her this day that I would be the one to end this dark spell which her twin sister will cast upon the Raizada family. I manage to push the door open unlocking it and then step inside.


“Khushi don’t” Sheetal shouts running behind me. She followed me here with the live video which was still on from NK’s side. “What are you doing?”

“I can end this, Sheetal.”


I look frantically around only to find some sharp object to prick my skin and shed my blood.

“You can’t put your life at risk. The spell doesn't work that way,” she shouts at me. “It should be either Chandrika’s blood or Arnav’s. Please stop this madness.”


I find it. A blade.. Sheetal stops me from grabbing it and turns me around to face her.


“We are not talking about a few droplets of blood here, Khushi. The spell demands a sacrifice. You’ll have to die if you have to break this spell. Do you hear me?”


Tears spring in my eyes again but I smile.

“If my death breaks the spell casted on my husband, I will happily die.”

“Don’t..” she sobs. This is the first time she is so emotional and in tears for me. “Chandrika deserves to die Khushi not you.”

“But we can’t bring her here… can we?” I shout. “Let me do this, Sheetal. I want to save Arnav. I love him.. He would do the same for me had it been him in my place.”

“Don’t..” she shouts.. “I’ll not let you do this..”


She is wasting my time. I realize there is only two more minutes for the eclipse. No one knows what will happen if the spell doesn't break before that. I push Sheetal away from me so hard that she falls on the ground. The mobile slips from her hand but she manages to grab it again. The live video is still on it but this time both NK and Akash are fighting against Arnav. Mohan is somewhere on the floor, injured but he could wake up any moment. Chandrika is loudly chanting the mantras. I run to the spot where she had casted the spell using Arnav’s twin brother’s ashes and bones.


“Arnav… Khushi is sacrificing for you..” Sheetal shouts pointing the phone screen towards me.


I turn to see him on the phone and that very moment, Arnav stops fighting and looks at NK’s phone screen. Akash and NK take a short relief to compose themselves. Despite being so far from me, I can see tears glistening in his eyes. I know somewhere within that blue-eyed Arnav’s evil form is my husband who loves me and can’t see me dying.


“I choose you over life, Arnav…” I mutter before cutting the vein of my arm.

“KHUSHIIIIIIIIIIII” He screams aloud trying to reach the phone but I collapse down.. My eyes are burning and closing down fast. I see Sheetal rushing to me and Arnav…. He falls down there too.. He… falls…


To be Continued..


NEXT PART 


Note: Couldn’t draft more tonight.

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39 comments:

  1. Awesome Update. Khushi is the shero of this story. The way she handled the situation is commendable. Khushi cut her veins. Hope nothing will happen to her. Good always win over the evil. Khushi's love for Arnav is just out of the world. She was willing to die for Arnav. Khushi though gave a huge sacrifice I still hope Khushi will be fine. Arnav is still alive in the evil even though Chandrika controlled him used him against his family. Arshi's love isn't that weak. Arnav's love will bring Khushi back.Chandrika will be defeated soon. Waiting for the next part

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  2. Wow that was intense.. Khushi can't die.. I'm sure something will save her.. looks like the spell broke as Arnav too fell. please give one more update of this tomorrow

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  3. Wow I love the update. Spell must have broken. Khushi is from Chandrikas blood line so it’s possible. If by chance khushi is pregnant she has arnavs blood too. But only thing is she cannot die!
    Thank you for updating!
    Dis_arshi

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  4. Then you should not have posted this as well if you couldn't draft more. What do you want us to do? Wait one more for you to actually post an update. Atleast respect us enough to not post half baked stuff

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    1. @ Anonymous yow lutakh nga Rew teh nyaka ham sa bopa. Fata nga nyu torop c blog b chimmlakati nonsense chikiliki peep

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    2. You should not have posted this nonsense . Do other readers a favor by leaving this blog. Oh, I forgot you have no life so you visit and talk nonsense about it all the time. How lunatic and negative a person can be ???

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    3. My above comment is for the original non sense poster.

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    4. I think u don't have gratitude...no one is paying her to update stories...if u don't wanna read just leave ...don't make a fuss... I totally agree how disappointed we get when we don't see updates that doesn't mean u can say whatever u want .....pleasee dont hurt others

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    5. Dude. No body stopped your from leaving this blog. You keep barking the same thing again and again instead of leaving! Do us all a favour and quit this blog. Seriously! Such an annoying comment to have every time!

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    6. Y'all should just ignore this bloody clout chaser. Don't know what gain you have spreading hate. Please leave this blog and Madhu di alone wth is ur problem anyway

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    7. So no she’s not doing any favour on anyone by posting these stories. This is her way of earning money.

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    8. Also though this is a free page with no advertisements through this page only she advertises her books nd generate readers for the same. It’s a big marketing rule if a service is free for the user thn the user is the product ( mode of earning money)not those services

      the phrase "if the service is free, you're the product"

      She’s not doing any favour by posting these stories. She’s making money from it.

      Also stop deleting this comment and stop portraying a bechari to the world

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    9. To dear Anonymous and the originator of this comment thread here. Your frequent bashing comments are spoiling the vibe of this blog and spreading hatred. I even politely asked you to leave the blog if you have problem with my delayed updates. I am not deleting any comments here nor I have time to go through your hate filled conversations. I still repeat this is a FREE blog where people read my works for FREE. It is my wish if I post my books here and advertise them. I am forcing no one to buy my books through this blog. This is the last time I am requesting you to stop spreading negativity and posting hateful/bashing comments over almost every post of mine. If you want to discuss about the plot and story, you can do that, but there is no need to bash me and my schedules for it. If this continues, I'll have to report your comments/IP address lawfully. Hope you understand. Thank You.

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    10. Mr/Ms. Anonymous! You are being too ridiculous now!

      Tell us one thing - Is this how you behave/bash loved ones aka your family if they are late for something?

      Madhu has a life too. If you can’t wait for the update, then stop visiting her blog for an update. You are just wasting your time dude!

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  5. I don't know why but I can't stop my tears reading this story nowadays. Maybe because of the love they have for each other not only arshi also the other ones in this story. Please post the next part too tomorrow

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  6. मंत्रमुग्ध (Spellbound) no pun intended here. That was Madhu take a bow darling. Fiddy

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  7. Arshi 's love for each other doesn't have words to describe. They are ready to sacrifice themselves for each other.the update is phenomenal.

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  8. Please please please another update for this story. Pretty please.
    Arshi's love for each other brings tears. They will think for others and ready to do anything for each other. Khushi sacrificed her life to save arnav and raizada. Can't wait to read how Khushi going to get save. I know nothing will happen kushi. Their love save her.
    In the arnav's evil form also Khushi's name bring his own self. Very deep and true love. Soulmates.

    Waiting for the next update dear.........
    Please another update tomorrow

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  9. Arnav under spell also can recognize khushi .hope khushi get well soon

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  10. is that a precap or an update?! I think you shouldn't have update this short part it's spoiled the suspense and the moment...
    am sorry if I hurt you it's not my intention , as a reader I wait for this moment so long and when it comes I didn't feel it..
    thank you anyway you're a brilliant writer

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  11. The moment where the love a husband has for his wife overpower upon a hate he has for his family after listening about the danger on life of his love, that was what i was waiting for. That moment was epic. But the things are yet to wait to know that was arnav's cry of khushi was coz of overpowering or khushi's sacrifice worked?. Im excited to read and not anxious as i know there would be no harm to khushi. She would be alright very soon but still im hoping to get the next update soon to get my answer. Im also glad that there was no unplanned pregnancy coz arshi has yet to complete their honeymoon ;)>

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  12. That was amazing can't wait

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  13. Niceee! So she has finally solved the mystery behind the key her mom gave! I'm guessing it won't be a sacrifice but, some sort of powerfull break that removes the curse since they do share the same bloodline! Nice.

    Cheers

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  14. Super interesting update. No worries Madhu will wait for your next part. Take your time 🥰👍

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  15. This is amazing. Waiting how khushi and arnav overcome.

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  16. Khushis mom would never have given the key to Khushi if it meant sacrificing khushis life to break the spell.. I'm sure she won't die

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  17. Stop deleting our comments and accept the reality

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  18. Also though this is a free page with no advertisements through this page only she advertises her books nd generate readers for the same. It’s a big marketing rule if a service is free for the user thn the user is the product ( mode of earning money)not those services

    the phrase "if the service is free, you're the product"

    She’s not doing any favour by posting these stories. She’s making money from it.

    Also stop deleting this comment and stop portraying a bechari to the world

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  19. Oh man, can vision this scene in my mind but would love to see on screen 😍... hey madhu somehow do recommend ur bride of sheesh mahal series to directors / or person from film industry so that they can create a short " webseries" including only barun and sanaya .. it would be a superhit series ...

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  20. Awesome written omg Khushi hopefully 🙏 nothing happened to her … amo

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  21. So this was just another post of the precap right?

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  22. Thats something undescribe able....you are amazing madhu...your writing skills are mind blowing....arshi s love is beyound of every hurdle....may be arshi s baby can save Khushi....it just a random thought .....i hope they will be together at the end

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  23. What a dramatic updates as usual awesome

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