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Chapter 52
Arnav’s POV
Kali Bawdi, the scariest deserted fort area in the outskirts of Delhi, is where Chandrika has been hiding all his long? Its freaking me out even thinking what else she would be doing at the moment to get a control on me. NK and Akash are on calls with the police to try locating Chandrika but I have told them not to make her alert that we are aware of her location.. not until I decide how to end all this. I’m aware the Lunar eclipse is only 12 hours away from happening which means we don’t have much time to put an end to the spell somehow.
“Shyam,” Di’s voice breaks my trance. She reaches him and tugs at his shirt. “Why did you do all this? You played me with them?”
“I played you?” he scoffs. “Anjali, you have been playing with the family’s feelings right from your childhood.”
“They are not my family.” She snaps.
“Not your family?” he laughs sarcastically. “Do you even know what you are saying? This family might not be related to you by blood but they have always treated you as one.”
“That’s because they didn’t know I wasn’t one of them.” She argues.
“But you knew it didn’t you? Then why didn’t you tell them and get away from them if you hate them so much, rather than sticking to them and hurting the family? Why Anjali?”
“For revenge.. They killed my father.”
“We didn’t,” Daadi interrupts. “That night was an accident, Anjali. My husband was trying to save himself from Chandrika who had a knife in her hand and wanted to pierce it in his heart. Your father came in between to save my husband and in the process of doing that, the knife stabbed his heart and he died.”
Tears flow down her cheeks as Di hears the truth.
“I don’t believe you… That’s not the truth.”
“It is the only truth you need to know because we don’t know what Chandrika has fed in your head. Your mother had left your father long back even when she was pregnant with his child. That’s when Arnav’s father got her in Sheesh Mahal thinking she was a lonely woman in need of help. And what did your mother do? Despite being married to someone else, she put her evil eye on my son, and when we got to know this and asked her to leave, she started blackmailing us of telling the world that the child in her womb belonged to my son. That’s when my husband, Arnav’s grandfather tried to dig for her history and we called your father to Sheesh Mahal to take her back. Unfortunately, he had to lose his life… because of your mother.”
Di keeps stepping behind in anger and confusion.
“You… tried to kill her too.. and bury her alive..”
“We didn’t try to kill her,” Daadi continues. “Chandrika cut her wrist cursing us that she would come back for revenge. We thought she died. That was our mistake and only to save our dignity, we buried their bodies at the backyard of Sheesh Mahal.”
“yes you buried her and thank God to Kanika Maai who saved her.”
“Kanika Maai..?” Khushi interrupts.
Di doesn't say anything but remains quiet.
“You know her?” I ask Khushi who shakes her head.
“Arnav you know that mad woman who always tried to scare you off? Her name was Kanika Maai.. The one who died a few days she tried scaring you a few times. She used to practice black magic too and hence people of this town had banned her from entering this place.”
Oh!
“Yes,” Di angrily continues. “She saved my mother because she saw your grandfather and grandmother burying these bodies. When she realized my mother was alive, she took her away to Kali Bawdi where she stayed originally after the people of this town had banished her. She treated my mother, and then even taught her the darkest secrets of casting spell.”
The grin on Di’s face tells me she is still so proud of her dark world and the knowledge she had on it. Now we all know how Chandrika managed to get out from where she was buried and how she continued her pregnancy while learning the deeper acts of black magic to get revenge. Now I connect the dots. Whilst Chandrika was recovering from her bruises after cutting her wrist, my parents got married and within two months my mother was also conceiving her first child. She had early labor and in the hospital she lost her baby who was prematurely delivered. Since Chandrika was in the same hospital that time and had delivered her twins, she got the perfect timing to give away one of her child, means Anjali di to the Raizadas so that they raise her as their own and so that someday Chandrika can use her for her benefit to get every inner secret of this family. That woman had really planned her revenge well.
“It’s over now,” Shyam exhales turning to Di. “Whatever you did Anjali is not something I can forget ever. You chose you side and I choose mine today. I am supporting this family who have given me so much love. I wish you too could see how good they are. You are revenging the wrong people for the wrong motive, Anjali. I wish you hadn’t done that. In fact now after knowing your real face, I wish I’d never met you.”
“Don’t say so, Shyam. I… I am ready to leave all of this.. You.. you don’t want me to support my mother. I wont… We will go away from this place and start our own family..” she cups his cheeks but he shrugs her hands away.
“A woman who can betray the family who gave her the best so far, can never be the one I can think of wanting in my life. We end here, Anjali. I can’t tolerate you anymore..”
“Shyam..” she scowls. “Take back your words..”
“I wouldn’t.. Because I mean each and every word I just said.. Just pray to god that this family doesn't hand you over to the police for putting them into so much trouble because if I was in their place, I would have done the same.”
Di looks aghast at his remark and then she laughs hysterically..
“You all will die..” she laughs. “Each one of you..”
My eyes tear seeing her cursing us. How could she not see how much we all loved her? Khushi presses my arm to give me the strength I need to witness a rough moment like this.
“You all will die… hhahahaha” she continues laughing, making me hate her too. She was my inspiration. I had given her place in my heart next to my mothers but she wasn’t worth it. I make my way to her and grab Di’s arms tight. Khushi keeps following me to ensure Di doesn't do anything to harm me.
Di’s laughing subsides as she looks in my eyes.
“You want us to die?” I ask her angrily.
“Yes Chotte..” she smiles. “Die die die.. but don’t worry. My mother will make you die the last. You’ll kill them all with your bare hands before you kill yourself.”
She laughs again. I am sick of her confidence.
“Your mother…” I clench my jaw. “Wouldn’t be able to touch my family..” I say. “And if there is anyone who needs to die.. its HER”
“ARNAV…” She angrily pushes me with all her might but I don’t nudge. Akash and NK rush to help and they catch hold of Di who seems to have lost her mental balance totally. It’s hard to see her like this.
“Hand her over to the police medical team. Let them decide what punishment she gets by law.”
Saying that I walk back to my room hearing Di’s loud screaming behind. She is never going to make it to being normal again. I can feel it. I might save my family somehow by tracing Chandrika and save my family but I already feel I have lost my sister forever. She was never my sister.. even if she meant the world to me.
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Chandrika’s POV
Next Day – Forty Five minutes to Lunar Eclipse
“Eem. Bhreem… kreem… naash.. vinaash… kreem..”
“Eem. Bhreem… kreem… naash.. vinaash… kreem..”
“Eem. Bhreem… kreem… naash.. vinaash… kreem..”
“Eem. Bhreem… kreem… naash.. vinaash… kreem..”
I circle the bones around the skull, putting the black seeds into the blood.. my blood. It’s a very sacred black ritual I am performing to get a control on Arnav’s mind. But why am I not seeing any effect? The blood in the vessel should turn black but its not. Something is coming in my way to reach Arnav’s mind. What is it? What the hell is it?
“Mohan,” I turn to my son who is standing some feet away, waiting for my command.
“Yes Maa.”
“Any update from Anjali?”
He denies.
“Nothing. I have tried calling her but she isn’t answering. I didn’t want anyone else from the Raizadas to notice my calls so I stopped. Maybe she is busy. And you asked her not to come here so, maybe she is playing it safe to look normal in the eyes of the Raizada family.”
I nod. Maybe. But I don’t have a good feeling about this.
“Try calling her again once.”
He agrees and dials her number.
“The reception here is not good. Let me check calling her from outside.”
The moment he steps to the door, the door opens with a loud bang and Arnav Singh Raizada, Akash and NK barge inside. What the hell are they doing here? How did they track this location? I quickly try to escape when NK and Akash reach me and block my way.
“What’s the hurry Chandrika? You have fled enough from our eyes all the time. Not anymore..” Akash mutters.
Before I can do anything I hear Mohan’s screaming as Arnav hits his stomach and keeps kicking him. Mohan tries to fight him too but everything in vain. Arnav is too strong for Mohan to succeed.
“Leave my son..” I shout and even try to reach him but Akash and NK hold my hands. My hands burn.. Yes.. And I know why.. These men are wearing Devi Maiyaa’s Raksha dhaaga and even if I try to control their minds or hypnotize them, nothing will work. My body is burning like its on fire only by their hold. No. I am more powerful than this. I try to fight them but the burn intensifies.
“Don’t make us tie you up old lady..” NK shouts.
By the time I am done fighting, I realize Arnav has tied my son Mohan to a pillar and is advancing towards me.
“C-H-A-N-D-R-I-K-A” He mutters angrily as he advances.
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Arnav’s POV
“So, YOU… are that venomous woman who tried to control my mind?” I ask.
She doesn't reply to that question but instead stares at my face with a grin.
“You have your father’s features… same nose.. same eyes… same height and color..”
“I have the same hatred too which he had for you.”
“He didn’t hate me” she shouts. “He was unlike you all. He was so.. so kind.. so giving.. so loving..”
“Yes he was kind… and generous,” I scowl. “That’s why he gave you shelter in Sheesh Mahal. That one mistake of his costed the entire family so far.”
“He was a fool to pick your mother.” She chides.
The moment she says this, I grip her neck. She squeals to set free but I tighten my grip.
I have never been this raged on anyone to try to kill that person. Never in my life I raised my hand on a woman but this one here is a beast. She is the one who killed my grandfather. She is the one who has been controlling my mind probably from ages in the name of her selfish revenge and is trying to wipe off my family’s existence from this place. How could I not try to harm her? She is the one who turned my sister Anjali against us. She is the one who is responsible for everything. I grip her neck hard but instead of giving up or feeling angry, she now laughs.
“Nannav.. stop. You’ll kill her.” NK and Akash tries to pull me away.
“Bhai, if anything happens to her how will we end the spell. Please stop.”
He is right. I leave my grip from Chandrika’s neck and though she falls on the ground, her laughing doesn't stop.
“You can’t end the spell,” she says laughing hysterically. “The eclipse will begin in 20 minutes and I wouldn’t tell you how it ends.”
I fist my fingers. How the heck is this going to end then? The next moment, I reach for Mohan who is tied up to a pillar. I prick the knife on his neck.
“Mohan…” Chandrika screams. “Don’t.. .don’t ARNAV….”
Mohan screams in pain.
“I wouldn’t mind slitting his throat Chandrika. Before the eclipse begins and I lose the control on my mind, and I start killing my own family, I will slit his throat and bring an end to your world too. If my family dies, so would yours…”
The rage in my tone is enough for her to know I mean every word I said.
“No…”
“Yes..” I pierce the knife harder on Mohan’s neck and blood begins to ooze out.
“Your blood..” she shouts. “Your blood or mine will end it…”
Akash immediately grabs her and NK dials the whatsapp group call to connect Sheetal and Khushi who are the recipients of that call so that they too hear what Chandrika mentions and so that they try to find a solution to end the spell using the clues Chandrika gives us.
“What?” I scream. “Your blood or mine? Where?”
She doesn't say further. Khushi and Sheetal have already joined the call and waiting desperately to hear out.
“Where Chandrika?” I try to pierce the knife angrily this time on Mohan’s neck and she cries.
“Sheesh Mahal…” she cries. “The same room where… this… this spell was casted.. on… your twin brother’s bones..”
What the HECK!! If me and Chandrika are both here … at Kali Bawdi.. which is almost 50 kms away from Sheesh Mahal, how can we reach Sheesh Mahal within 20 minutes to lunar eclipse to sacrifice her blood or mine on that same place where the spell was casted in that secret room connecting the basement? That’s effing impossible. Seeing the expressions on our face, and knowing we can do nothing about it, Chandrika continues her laugh.
“Eem. Bhreem… kreem… naash.. vinaash… kreem..” She shouts louder, blowing air on the black water which she was doing some black magic on when we barged in here. And just then I realize my Raksha Dhaga has been fallen on the ground, probably while fighting with Mohan and before I try to pick it up.. my other side returns.. The blue-eyed version of me…I can feel him.. overpowering my strength.. my mind and stopping me from picking that Raksha Dhaga..
“Damn hell” NK and Akash both scream aloud terrified by my transformation. I grin at them craning my neck to ease up.
“Hell is where you are going to visit soon boys,” I mutter before marching towards them.
To be Continued.
THE CLIMAX scene is here friends.. Tell me how this chapter was and what you are expecting out of the next chapter which I will post back to back tomorrow or day after tomorrow (a precap if I can't post this full update tomorrow)
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Loved it! Gave me goosebumps!
ReplyDeleteWow, very well written! I think Khushi is already pregnant which she dint realize yet. That's the only possibility which can break the spell now.
ReplyDeletecant wait for next update
ReplyDeletewow it is amazing dear
Excellent
ReplyDeleteBlockbuster update
ReplyDeleteI think khushi is pregnant and only she can save arnav now.I just can't wait for next update😍😍😍
Last para gave me goosebumps and some uneasiness in my stomach pit.
ReplyDeleteI don't want to sound psychotic but why do I feel Khushi is pregnant and she might undergo miscarriage and the blood will end the magic spell as the child too is Arnav's blood. Just a crazy thought
ReplyDeleteIts just a fiction so we can have such scenarios and thoughts as these things hardly happens in real life so when they can happen in fiction world why can't miscarriages of heroine. This will add more sense and will be intriguing to read too.
DeleteOh no , arnav turned into his evil twin😱 ...how can they go to sheesh mahal now to drop blood in that room ? I think chandrika lied ....hope khushi does something 😳😳
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome everything we didn't expect. I did not based on precap expect her to reveal the end to the curse nor Arnav losing the dhaga. Wonderful.👏👏❤️Fiddy
ReplyDeleteWhat is meant by arnav's blood in basement? Is it only his presence or should he blèed there ?
ReplyDeleteAwesome update di. Especially Chandrika's part. U are phenomenal
ReplyDeleteEverything is good. But I don’t understand few things. What’s the link to bride of sheeshmahal? She has to have a big part in this story. She just has premonitions and that’s all. She didn’t get any premonitions after her consummation. It was hard to find a clue n solution until the last moment. It seems like Chandrika is the main character here than Khushi. I’m sorry if this offended anyone but I’m not really following the direction of this story. This is not a ranting. I just commented about my views.
ReplyDeleteDis_arahi
The next part shud clear that up.
DeleteOkay sis. I’ll wait for that
DeleteI think khushi is pregnant and that unborn also raizada right it has the power to break the spell don't know it's just an assumption but u only can give that answer what will happen next now blue eyed Arnav also appeared it's too scary how will they going to break the spell and save the raizadas especially Arnav also pls update sooooooooon dear
ReplyDeleteAwesome Update. So Arnav or Chandrika's block can end the spell at the Sheesh Mahal room where the spell is casted with Arnav's twin brother. Arnav can't return as the time span is short. Also the Raksha Dhaga has fallen and blue eyed Arnav overpowering Arnav. Khushi might be pregnant and her unborn child can break the spell. Can't wait for the next part. Too much excited. Thanks for the Update
ReplyDeleteCliff hanger. Not fair dear..... The next 20 minutes going to be the scariest and crucial. Blue eye arnav back. How akash and NK going to save themselves and khushi going to save the family. I think their devil maiya raksha Dhaka will save them.
ReplyDeleteRaizada and shyam cut the tie with alkali. And she became mentally ill. Her chapter closed. Only chandrika and Mohan chapter left to end.
Please please give long update without a cliffhanger.
Waiting for there next update dear.......
Last part is amazing. Blue eyed Arnav is overpowering Arnav and Chandrika or Arnav's blood can end the spell. Little time left. How can they reach there. Excited for the next part already. Thank you 😘
ReplyDeleteMind blowing. 😍 loved how shyam tried to make sense to anjali. Can’t wait how they get arnav’s or Chandrika’s blood. Khushi or Sheetal already have Arnav’s blood sample? 🤔
ReplyDeleteThey collected the blood of everybody for testing they can use that
ReplyDeleteLoved it. Can't wait to read next part
ReplyDeleteAnjali's blood can work too.. as she is chandrika's daughter or khushi might be preganant
ReplyDeleteVery interesting and gave me goosebumps through out the update
ReplyDeleteAmazing chapter 🤩
ReplyDeleteWait, They took all their blood sample. Will that do? Or will Khushi try with hers. Considering she hasn't played a part after a couple of episodes! There should be some major move from her for it to be equally strong. Nice. We'll written! Cheers
ReplyDeleteThey say power of Mahadev can break any spell ..maybe they will chant Hanuman chalisa loudly..the evil will go away
ReplyDeleteWhy does in sister has to be "next to mother" or "second mother" in every story, especially Anjali to arnav? Its too cliché, repetitive and unrelistic.
ReplyDeleteNo arnav, chandrika isn't responsible for making your sis against you and your family, anjali herself was responsible. No third person and come between two or break a bond until there is a problem with the two or they themselves wants it. Anjali wasn't a toddler to be lure by an elder into doing anything, neither she was lack of any resources in her life to know about right or wrong and good or bad. She was given more than necessary.
ReplyDeleteOh wow I think khushi is pregnant and that's one way arnav blood is present in sheesh Mahal I can't wait to read what happens next
ReplyDeleteOh why khushi wasn't here!!! It was so thrilling. Not being a maniac or sadist but it would've been interesting if the fight was between khushi and blue eyed arnav and chandrika.
ReplyDeletePlz plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzz No baby No khushi pregnant pretty plz. Its toooooo early. The story is about the Bride not the groom, SIL or the baby so i guess it should bethe bride only to do the honours. Already khushi is being absent a major part recently don't wanna add 1 more person other than her have played part more important. Plzzzzzzzz no baby writer dear.
ReplyDeleteClimax right it would be ended by bride of sheeshmahal bcoz she is pregnant with arnvs baby so that's his blood by the way so
ReplyDeleteArnav have transformed into beast.. who will and how will save the family and Arnav.. mind blowing chapter.. loved it.. waiting for climax.. Thank you
ReplyDeleteKhushi must be expecting and some how it will break the spell or might get blood from Anjali as she is Chandrika's daughter so her blood this is my theory. so eager to know it
ReplyDeleteCliff hanger. Eagerly waiting for the next part
ReplyDeleteKhushi is related to chandrika as she is her mom sis or if she might be pregnant. Anyway I think Khushi can only break this spell.
ReplyDeleteWow. It gives me goosebumps. I am sure khushi is pregnant and her miscarriage will save Arnav and his family.
ReplyDeleteOh the end…. Waiting for the next part
ReplyDeleteHow akash and nk save themselves
ReplyDeleteWon't Anjali's blood work? What about Khushi? She's related to Chandrika
ReplyDeleteWow that was excellent. Ooops Arnav is changed to evil again. Maybe Khushi and Sheetal might do something.
ReplyDeleteOh God!! What a climax! The last scene was completely unexpected for me. I wasn’t expecting the evil twin’s return :O
ReplyDeleteAwesome written.. amo
ReplyDeleteWonderful fabulous update dear
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