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Locked - Part 20A







Chapter 20A



Khushi’s POV


“Arnav Singh Raizada,” Arnav shook hands with Dad after touching his feet and taking his blessing. That one act was enough to prove his bonding with Dad will be good and I need not worry.


Dad completes the handshake and then gives him a hug just like he had embraced Akash a while ago. I watch the two interact. It’s said that a girl always wants her father’s shadow in her husband and as I gape at the two men, I love the most, I realize it’s true. Dad has never stopped supporting me in all my life’s decision and I believe Arnav is going to take on that legacy from my father. Dad is still engrossed in speaking to Arnav who keeps glancing at me. He smiles and raises his brow as if asking me why I am admiring them from so long. I shrug. He need not need to know. Can’t I gawk at my would-be husband being so good with my father?


We have dinner and I don’t see Maxi anywhere. Payal though tells me that when she was checking out Akash’s bedroom, Maxi was there but Akash handled the situation. So overall, we both have met Maxi and we still don’t get good vibes about our future with that dog in this house. But I know how much Arnav and Akash are doing their best to ensure Maxi doesn’t come before us much and spoil our mood. It pains me to see them do that. I hope with time, our fear for dogs will ease and we will accept Maxi as heartily as we have accepted the rest of the family members.


After dinner, we get the shock of our lives. Dad and the Raizadas have planned a surprise Roka for us. We are made to sit with our respective partners and the ritual is fulfilled successfully. I see Arnav and Akash turning to the stairs constantly throughout the ritual. I know they looking for Maxi.. They are missing him. I have heard from Di today how Maxi has always been in every tradition and event this family follows. He’s also there is every family picture they click and only because Payal and me are scared of dogs, the family is keeping him away. Not fair.


“You can get him out..” I murmur to Arnav who quickly turns to me with a frown.

“You mean Maxi?”

“Who else? He’s the only one missing in the family. He deserves to see you and Akash getting hitched with your partners..”


Though Arnav laughs at that comment, he then goes serious.


“Khushi, it’s fine. We really don’t want to scare you and Payal. It’s an important day for you two and..”

“Maxi is family and he deserves to be here.. Call him..”


Arnav’s lips twitch into a thankful smile. He turns to Akash who shows him the same surprise. Looks like Payal too has given her consent. So now that they have our approvals, Arnav asks Hari Prakash to get Maxi downstairs..


I quickly grab Arnav’s arm seeing Maxi coming down from the stairs. He looks hungry for love and the family’s attention. Sweat beads form on my forehead which Arnav wipes off.


“He’s a family. That’s all you have to remember to ease your fear..” he whispers.


I nod and close my eyes as Maxi first jumps towards me and Arnav.. Arnav pulls him away from me and rubs his back. My heart beats louder and I don’t dare to open my eyes at all.


“Maxi.. what did I tell you?” Arnav talks to the dog.. “Mumma’s scared of you… don’t scare her more.. You want to meet her… I will introduce but you got to sit here.. not on Mumma’s lap.. Okay?”


Mumma?? He calls me Mumma of Maxi which literally breaks my heart. If Maxi considers me as his Mumma, I should be cuddling him and not run away like this.


“He’s sitting away. Now open your eyes sweetheart.” Arnav insists and I obey.


Maxi is on the other couch, little away from us. With his eyes on me and tongue out, its like he’s waiting to pounce on me. I grip Arnav’s arm tighter.


“He won’t do anything.. He’s just admiring you.. Should he not?”


There’s pain in Arnav’s voice which kills me so I pretend to be okay..

“He can.. he can but..”

“Say hi to him.. He’ll like it..”

“What if he jumps on me?”

“He wont.. Just say it.” Arnav coaxes and all this while Maxi silently watches us exchange this conversation.


The family with dad are out in the lawn. So they don’t get to see this drama


“What if he barks? I …”

“Let me ask HP to take him away.. It’s fine.”


Arnav gives up and is about to call HP when I pull his arm again.


“I can say Hello…”

“Sure?” he grins.

“Of course.. I mean.. if I say hello and he barks, you tell him not to. That should be fine..”

“Okay”


I pass him a weak smile and turn to Maxi who’s breathing as hard as I am.


“He…ee…ll…looooo, Maxi..”


Maxi smiles and raises himself on his toes, standing like a human, with his arms curled. That’s his way of saying Hello? Aww!! Not bad.. My grip on Arnav’s Sherwani loosens.

“Saw? He doesn’t bark unnecessarily.. only when he is hungry he does and when some stranger comes in the house..”

“Me and Payal are strangers too for him..”

“No. We made sure to show him your pictures and that’s how he takes you both as a family..”


Good.!! I am glad they did this.. Payal also says a Hi to Maxi and he sways his tail. Soon he is off the room and I take a sigh of relief but he comes back kicking a ball and I realize he wants us to play with us. Of course not.. It’s too soon. Arnav and Akash play a minute with Maxi to keep his heart and then Hari Prakash takes him away.


To be Continued




Note: Will post Locked Part 20B tomorrow night.

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18 comments:

  1. Awesome Update. Arshi's surprise romantic is complete. Arnav addressing Khushi as Maxi's mom is sweet. Arnav is trying his best to erase Khushi's fears. Maxi's gestures are so adorable. Both the sisters will surely overcome their fears one day and start loving Maxi. Thanks for the Update😍😍

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  2. I am too scared of dogs but I am in love with your Maxi….the way you describe his entry his love for his family. So, the roka is done….waiting for other functions.

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  3. Aww to they gave the couple the surprise of roka that awesome πŸ˜πŸ‘Œ and the maxi and arshi part was cute ☺️😍 ... And the way khushi was admiring arnav and her father was Adorable ☺️😍πŸ₯° ...post it soon

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  4. Arnav meet Khushi's father and greet him in a traditional way Khushi's views on Arnav is beautiful. Both the sisters meet Maxi and are scared of him. Hope the sisters will soon start bonding with Maxi like Akash and Arnav. Finally surprise roka is completed. The brothers love Maxi so much and Khushi also understood their emotions and the importance of Maxi in Arnav's life. Love the way Arnav is trying to ease Khushi's fears. Maxi is so adorable and his bond with Arnav is so sweet. Arnav addressing Khushi as Maxi's Mumma is nice and Khushi is feeling guilty Hope she overcomes her fears. Maxi's gesture of saying hello is nice . It's good that Arnav had already introduced Khushi and Payal to Maxi. One day Khushi and Payal will share the same bond like Akash and Arnav with Maxi.

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  5. Slowly slowly arnav is filling the gap between maxi and khushi.

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  6. Imagining sanaya scared of dogs, who is extremely fond of animals forget about dogs, is so ironical and amusing🀣.

    Its not easy to get familiar, carefree and not be fearful of something you are so scared and frighten about yet Khushi and payal did great and didn't runaway. I wouldn't have gone near even in 50 meters of radius πŸ™ˆ.

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  7. Aww so cute update di..❤️❤️

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  8. Aww...arnav and maxi's bonding is so adorable...

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  9. We as a family got two big dogs and we love them to bits . They live inside the house with us . People tend to afraid when they see them and some avoid coming to our house. But we won’t change a thing .That is how much precious they are. At least Arnav and Akash trying with Khushi and Payal. My son wouldn’t even fall in love with someone who does not love dog

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  10. Awesome update. So Khushi and Payal relation have improved with maxi by saying hi πŸ‘‹ hello πŸ‘‹ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Wonderful, nice to see their Roka is done too.

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  11. Aww that's super cute lovely maxi stole our hearts

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  12. Maxi so cute. I really want khushi to give cuddle to Maxi soon. The boy is very sad to stay away from his mumma khushi. Roka completed... hope marriage soon.
    Maxi love his dad and mumma aloot. Very eager to see mumma(khushi) and Maxi bond soon.

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  13. Even am really scared of dogs.. but like said last time, would like to see girls drama with dog & their family laughing while holding their stomach. Only their partners come & rescue them..

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  14. If arnav is dad then what about akash & anjali?? Chacha & bua?? πŸ˜†

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  15. Fabulous wonderful update dear

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  16. such a beautiful update...

    Maxi is a cutie pie & a very obedient pup... He already loves Khushi & Payal & they both have also started to accept him...

    So Roka is done & now both the couples are officially hooked ❤️

    Thanks for the beautiful update, Madhu

    Love
    Kavita Wadnerkar ❤️

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  17. Cannot believe I missed reading this yesterday. Wonderful and sooooo cute.

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