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It's crazy but does it happen with you? Like whenever you finish reading a Fiction part I post, you start imagining the next scenes on your own? So many crazy scenes go in the back of your mind, don't they? Here is a chance to spill them out. Both my fictions Rise of the Devil and You Ought to be Mine 3 have paused at a very critical point. Which Fiction's future scenes are you thinking about? And what are they? Here are some hints for the upcoming parts of these fictions: 

Rise of the Devil 

Khushi wanted to escape the dark world once, now she is the Devil's Queen. 

1. Will Khushi accept her new identity or is she going to rebel? 

2. Why was Arnav Singh Raizada hiding his real identity of being the King of Devil? 

3. Arnav knew Khushi was looking for an escape route. He can't confine her neither let her roam freely without his eyes on her. how will he handle his Queen to give up her resolve to escape? 

4. Where is the family of the Devil King and who are they? 


You Ought to be Mine - Season 3


Coming to New York was a surprise for Khushi but she didn't get the welcome she deserved all thanks to Naina. 

1. What will be Khushi's reactions to Naina's presence in the Raizada family, especially around her Laad Governor? 

2. Is Arnav's long desired fantasy to wake up at his Penthouse, on a Sunday morning, kissing his wife leisurely on bed, with her hands all over him.. anywhere round the corner? 

3. What will be Meera's reactions to Khushi's domination in the Penthouse, which once followed her rules? 

4. Is this one-week trip extending by any chance? 


I am so curious to know what you guys think about these questions and more ... 

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Advay Raj Bohra

What a perfect night at a Bar – Meeting a stranger and then making her pretend to be my girlfriend for winning a bet. Least did I know by the next morning she was going to be my legally wedded wife. I never wanted a marriage and the complications that came with it but one look at my accidental wife, Jiya and my emotions spiraled out of control, my life changed drastically.

Jiya Mathur

My Café house was at the risk of shutting down having no support from the bankers and financers. The only light at the end of that dark tunnel was the CEO of the Media Channel, Advay Raj Bohra. I was drawn into his Universe as he offered me a proposition I couldn’t deny.

Advay and Jiya’s worlds collide as they step into a Marriage Bubble promising no messy emotional entanglements. Will they ever want a real relationship?

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SNEAK PEEK 3



“Mary, Coffee” Advay screams from the living room.

Mary turns to me and waits to see if I am going to serve him my style Coffee which I usually do these days. Advay likes the Coffee I make hence I had taken this initiative to brew fresh Coffee for him every morning. Not today. I am still angry on him. I ask Mary to make Coffee for him and serve. She doesn’t debate over it and in few minutes’ hands the Coffee to Advay. She comes back in and continues her work. Advay follows her in the kitchen.

“I need my regular Coffee” He snaps turning to me.

“Mary” I don’t look at him. “Tell him this was his regular when I wasn’t in this house”

“What kind of card are you playing, Jiya?” He fumes. “I just need Coffee and you know I like the way you make one. I have to start my day. So, stop being so arrogant” 

Mary, tell him he doesn’t need to play the victim card either”


I still don’t look at him. The Idlis are steamed and once Daadu comes out, I will serve him hot Idlis with Sambar. I see Mary leaving the Kitchen and that’s only because Advay gestured her to do so. Why? Now, I freeze. I still manage to show some courage on my face and continue wiping the Crockery to serve. Advay reaches me and pins me to the Kitchen slab behind.


“Stop playing games with me Jiya Mathur”

“Jiya Bohra” I correct meeting his gaze. “Daadu is around. Spill your words correctly”

He is even more annoyed now. I get to see him clearly. He is showered and his head is still wet. I don’t know if he does that purposely these days to make me wipe his head or he genuinely forgets because of his work? He has also shaved and I can smell his musky cologne. This man is seriously dangerous for women with weak hearts. Glad I am not one of them. Really? Then why is my heart pounding by his closeness?

“Don’t ignore me, Jiya. Make me a Coffee” He demands.

“You ignore my questions, that’s acceptable. I can’t? We both have signed the same contract Advay. What goes for you, goes for me too”

He knows exactly what I am pissed about. I wanted to know about Sonia last night and he shut me off.

“Fine. You will repent ignoring me because I will make sure I am all you think about this whole day. Wait and watch”

41 comments:

  1. About ROTD

    1-Accepting or rebelling is a different story. First she might struggle to even understand the sudden life changing events & moreover with Arnav's true identity

    2-May be there's some rule that he can reveal it only after he gets his queen.. U never know 🤷‍♀️

    3-Well.. He is the DEVIL KING so he can do whatever he wants.

    4-I have this feeling right from the beginning that buaji is Arnav's mother & may b she lost her husband due to this same devil thing & she didn't want her son to go on the same path but he proved to b a rebellion.

    YOTBM

    1-She won't watch everything like a mute spectator... She will definitely raise her disappointment.

    2- I hope so 🤞 He deserves that much at least

    3- I don't think Khushi would try to dominate... But yes there r gonna b difference of opinions between the two pairs of saas & bahu & that's gonna b an entertaining saas-bahu war, for sure 👍

    4-I'm scared that instead of extending, this trip might not get cut short from it's original course... Hope not...


    Now my question, Madhu...

    Which story r u gonna update tomorrow?? Pls reply

    Though I'm rooting for YOTBM, again 🤞

    Love
    Kavita ❤️

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    1. I see many have requested to post one more update of YOTBM and I have drafted some more of that fiction already. Might update YOTBM again tomorrow.

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    2. Thank u thank u madhu....cant wait to read next part of YOTBM��

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    3. Madhu please do😍i want yotbm, I want khushi to insult or scold naina.

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    4. Thank you so much, Madhu 😘

      Tu khupch sweet aahe.. Mahiti aahe na tula 😍

      Love
      Kavita Wadnerkar ❤️

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    5. 😘😘❤️❤️

      Love
      Kavita Wadnerkar ❤️

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    6. Thank you madhuji.

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    7. Thank you madhu... waiting for the update...

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  2. YOTBM3: 3. Khushi should teach meera a good lesson about being a good mother not a possessive obsessive mother who always wants to keep his son under her pallu..
    BESIDES Naina's long due insults from khushi's side is also very much needed on order to show her the real place in their lives...

    4. Khushi should keep her head strong and return back after 1 week because she has her dreams too that in any way shouldn't be compromised.

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  3. ROTD: Khushi should never stop trying to escape... She deserves to lead a peaceful life and if Arnav truly loves her will help her to achieve that only...rest I can leave on your expert hands and I know you'll never let us down!!!

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  4. ROTD: Khushi should never stop trying to escape... She deserves to lead a peaceful life and if Arnav truly loves her will help her to achieve that only...rest I can leave on your expert hands and I know you'll never let us down!!!

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  5. Rise of the devil:
    1. Definitely khushi will be shocked and it will take some time for her to accept her new identity
    2.May be arnav want to accomplish something before revealing his identity
    3.khushi is already attracted to arnav....though she wishes to fled from the place ,i think she wont be able to or may be arnav will now explain her things unknown to her...
    4. I think buaji is arnav's mother...i had this feeling since she is acting differently with arnav...

    YOTBM:
    1. Definitely arnav is going to get a earful from khushi�� i think khushi ll demand answers from arnav regarding naina..i think it is necessary for their relationship to move forward
    2. As arnav is waiting for a passionate moment with his wife in his penthouse bedroom...so are we...��seriously arnav deserves to get his wish fulfilled as he did so much for khushi's sake and being a responsible husband.pls pls pls make khushi kiss him��
    3. Meera is going to blow up with the presence of daadi n khushi for sure and she cant take it if khshi gets more importance from her son...but she should realize it since she separated her husband from his mother..
    4.hope this trip extends ...arnav n khushi need time to understand each other better ...khushi needs to realize her importance in arnav's life..tat is the only way she will take a step towards her husband ...and arnav need to realize his love for his wife...tis all needs them spending more time with each other...

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  6. Well in ROTD
    firstly khushi will be shocked and I guess she'll try to rebel but arnav being arnav won't let her go and will make sure she accepts this position
    Secondly, I guess there's some motive like I kind of think like a revenge which arnav wants against the dark world bec I guess he didn't want to start this dark world but he did bec of some circumstances
    Thirdly, he won't let her leave at anyyyy cost I mean even we don't want that🤭🤪 also we want some romantic moments btw them
    Lastly, I guess arnav's family someone might have got killed he's kind of taking a revenge
    And in YOTBM
    Firstly, khushi will be jealous of seeing Naina so friendly around arnav and he'll be happy thinking she's jealous and surely khushi will do some part of claiming her husband infront of Naina specially
    Secondly, I want that to happen 😂 and I guess at some point even khushi want that to happen because even she wants to give a chance to this wedding as arnav is helping her fulfilling dadi's wishes
    Thirdly, meera will be shocked not so happy and will try to let her guard down but arnav won't let that happen also khushi is an independent women who's capable of handling her so called sophisticated saaas
    Lastly, I think instead of extending this trip they go on a short honeymoon like a day or two
    Also I want to read YOTBM episode first
    As always loved it loved it loved it 💕💕💕
    Biya

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  7. YOTBM
    1. Khusi definitely should politely remind naina she did wrong and didn't have any rights to let raizada family wait in lobby especially dadi in her age . The consequences would have been bad she should scold her for that Infront of arnav at least.

    2. Definitely arnav should get his share of romance and his right not on first night stay since khusi will need a day to cool down.maybe next day

    3.i think what Meera did she should get a glimpse of the same I mean wish khusi could do something so that arnav decides to stay in India .

    4.extending trip I don't know but for sure khusi should stay with arnav or arnav should stay with khusi in India
    Don't like them separated

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  8. About The devil King:Cant predict anything as their is to many hidden secrets here...But YOTBM:I hope Khushi shows that naina her real place before her laad governor without fearing anyone there...2:About Arnav long desired fantasy then i think that will happen just the day Khushi and daadi will return back to India..3:I hope Khushi teach that meera a good lesson as she's still dreaming about that naina being her daughter in law...4:I dont think the trip will extend...If Khushi and daadi return back to india as they had planned then that seperation and distance will make Arnav to take this decision about shifting to India permantely...Hope We get another Update of YOTBM tomorrow...

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  9. YOTBM
    1. I also think khusi should first send dadi to guestroom to rest and then she should apologize to naina that she didn't mean to ruin their private dinner but dadi can't wait in lobby so long so now she will leave and wait in lobby until their private dinner ends.

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  10. U can't even imagine the whirlpool of thoughts and scenarios goes in my mind🤭...
    ROTD: as khushi's situation has got ironical as she now has got MARRIED to the cage itself from which she wanted to escape, so i want her to behave ironical to i.e accept her new identity nd role so tht it will affect arnav who too may be wanted the same life khushi's wanted nd may be started to hope to get it too after seeing khushi's determination bcoz he definitely is in dark world for a reason only,may be revenge from shashi gupta, nd wanted have a happy peaceful life but after seeing khushi's opposite reaction nd behavior gets worried nd himself started work to get out of the dark world .

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  11. I'm only waiting for things to unfold cause tho I imagine alot after every update u always surprise me with something better.. so I better wait and watch to be surprised and pleased as always

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  12. The hints and upcoming parts are wonderful

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  13. For ROTD
    1. Khushi will be in a trance for a brief period. Like she'll blow him up on the first night and then pause...
    2. Arnav couldn't see her off beat.
    3. Khushi won't get her freedom in devils security and devil will notice it.
    4. He will put all his efforts to make this relationship work and will try to be the man she was looking for.
    5. Khushi will blend in some time and they will open up to each other specially arnav.
    6. Arnav will make some confession about being in the dark world... Like why he is doing this because he don't have wrong motives (he don't like gujrals involved with drugs).
    7. Some brushing drama and happily ever after...

    YOTB
    1. arnav will have a tough time with khushi after dadi meets everyone.
    2. Arnav will crave for her as she will be mad about naina's constant nagging.
    3. Naina will put up a lot of drama showing her right on ASR. And in return ASR will stay letting his wife feel important.
    4. Khushi will understand the seriously of his emotions and they will have a deeep conversation before going back India. She will tell him she want this to work but she genuinely needs time...
    5. And once she is back they will be like 24*7 in touch couple (naina poking her nose sometimes.)
    6. Arnav pays a surprise visit to India and sharing the bedroom Will be tough and they both will give inn... Finally together...
    7. Then comes the devki estate, naina, Meera, and aayush in the drama running along side in the background... 💯

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  14. I read all the above comments... yes it struck my mind with various questions?

    Whatever they are, I believe that you will bring justice to them and I am waiting for them to unfold.

    Hope to see some updates soon.

    Madhu, thank you for your stories, it really helps me while I watch over my sick sister in the hospital nowadays. Keep us the good job dearie.

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    1. Hey... I hope your sister gets fine soon. Take care of her dear and yourself too.

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  15. All 3.story going great...tough to choose

    Devil - khushi will be shocked and I guess tough time ahead of devil. Looking for answer for question 3 and 4.

    Mine season 3- Naina will face KASR hope khushi shows her place after the stunt she did.
    Looks like arnav's fantasy is going to be fulfill soon thanks to dadi

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  16. I don't read the Devil King so can't comment but the other one....


    I don't think Khushi will say anything to Naina as long as Daadi is around because she wouldn't want Daadi to know how they were treated..

    So I hope she sends Daadi inside and then blasts Naina and gives Arnav & Meera a piece of her mind as well for encouraging a friend to take such liberties.


    I don't want any physical romance between Arnav & Khushi till they have reached some level of understanding. While physical intimacy is an important part of any marriage.....a marriage that is predicated on physical attraction has a shaky foundation... where having sex is far more important than getting to know and understand your partner, I would question the commitment to marriage.. then what is the difference between marriage and a one night stand?

    I don't see Khushi dominating the penthouse, as per her she is here only for a holiday.. but I don't see her taking shit from Meera quietly either...I can see Daadi getting hurt because Meera is going to extract revenge for what all she went through now that Daadi is under her roof.

    And perhaps we will finally get to know what happened between Meera & Daadi years ago.

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  17. 1. I'm sure she will take time to rebel. But eventually she will accept it.
    2. This is I'm not sure of. It seems like everyone is still respect his identity. May be to protect his family. Is Shashi aware of this fact?
    3. He will make sure she enjoys her life and give what she wants. He is not that bad. Let's see.
    4. Again. We didn't have a clue about his family background. Earlier I felt that Buaji was related to Arnav. But I'm still not sure of it.

    Okay this is for the Rise of the Devil

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  18. 1. Khushi will not be happy. But I really hope she will discuss with Arnav about their marriage and this third party involvement. She is a matured girl. So hope she will act like one in this matter.

    2. I guess it's too early for them. But sleeping on one bed can happen during this trip. As I said earlier I really want them to decide what they want from each other without fighting. This is a marriage not an affair. They had a chance to back off knowing the responsibilities of it. They cant behave like they are playing a game here. That will be too much for a girl like khuhsi who values her culture.

    3. Khushi is not someone who wants to dominate a house unlike Naina. She is like if you are good to me I'm good if not I don't care. Meera should realize that khushi is a girl who will never demand for rights as a daughter in law. But she will not tolerate if Meera poke her nose in their life with Naina.

    4. I'm not sure. Only Arnav and Daadi can make it happen. It must get extended hopefully!

    This is for the You ought to be Mine 3

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  19. YOTBM :

    1. If Naina is his friend and stays in limit, I think Khushi is mature enough to understand it. But before that, she should teach Naina basic manners of how to deal with family members of a person in whose house she is having her so called private dinner. Girl pissed me off so bad last night. Someone really needs to tell Naina what is OutOfBoundException Error!!! I think Khushi would be the best person and it would be great if Arnav and also Meera(Ms-I-m-not-wrong) supports her DIL bcoz Khushi would be right in doing so.

    2. I was grinning reading this hint, already imagining Khushi's hands all over him. I dont think it 'd be wrong if they wake up in each others' arms. They like each other already, (Arnav even loves as Dadi thinks n Khushi is willing to work their marriage too) and this warmth(its not just physical in waking up next to your spouse even if marriage is new) of cuddling 'll bring emotional security to both. Help them make decisions keeping each other in mind. I personally feel it 'll strengthen their bond. Khushi if does it on her own not coz of his fantasy 'll surely make her realise what does SHE want in this relationship, help her decide the pace.

    3. I don't want think Khushi is gonna dominate the house...though her taking Naina to task may make Meera feel so but if she has tiny bit of common sense, she 'll realise this attitude of Naina can prove harmful to her too. I hope with two MILs in house and two DILs...dynamics between Dadi and Meera change and hopefully they begin to understand each other through the parallels present. We dont know what happened in the past between this pair of MIL-DIl but today Meera is the one who seems completely indifferent towards Dadi. 1she could atleast be cordial to her , make her stay worth it..if nothing else. I feel Khushi can be that catalyst without even needing to lock horns with Meera. I loved how Devyani used to draw parallels everytime Manorama cribbed about her DILs in Ipkknd.

    4. It would be lovely if Khushi can extend her trip but without making her work suffer. She can take tips from Arnav about how he managed his work during his stay in India.

    Long-distance marriages are hard especially when its just the beginning and when case is this type when understanding between couple isn't high...it would be best to stay together till relationship moves to mature phase.

    I dont think it ll be about why wife should uproot her career and not mhusband. They can check the feasibility of which relocation is better, whose profession 'll suffer less, who among the two can manage. If Arnav can move to India without losing much professionally, there would be no need of any ego or something bcoz Ayush did the same thing many years ago.

    If Khushi explores her options and finds she can expand her store to US, if market would be great, if she can manage both branches even she can relocate.

    Main problem in all this would be of Dadi. She shouldn't live alone and I dont think, she 'll be ready to move to US, even if she agrees it 'll be for ArShi's marital sake. If she is willing to settle in Us for herself an herself alone that is different matter altogether but for that dynamics between her and her son & DIL need to change and that's almost hopeless case!!!


    I hope I didnt blabber too much par aaj to aapne khud chance dia...Couldn't resist!!!

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  20. raise of the devil :
    I always had this feeling like he was hiding something (Telegu movie flashback types :P..) and yes when u gave that twist in last epi i was like huhu!! finally the mass entry of our HERO happend....

    Now about the hints.. I think Kushi/her mom might have helped him or his with something unknowing in the past and he might have promised to safeguard her hence he was hiding his identity and joined with gupta's as body guard ....

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  21. Waiting for another update of yotbm3

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  22. I usually don't imagine the next track of the fictions because it spoils the fun! But let's try and see what I imagine in upcoming tracks!

    1. Khushi should be angry! And Arnav needs to know how badly his dearest wife was treated for the very first time in her Sasural?
    I am sure Naina did this intentionally. But she still has my sympathy. I am sure it is difficult for Naina too to SHARE her friend Arnav with someone else. If it's true that she had feelings for Arnav then her heartbreak is
    Imaginable. Khushi needs to know that just like her Arnav too had a different life before coming to India and people like Naina were a part of it. I hope out of jealousy she don't overreact and embarras herself.

    2. Sex without emotional intimacy is not my cup of tea. Having sex just because of a mere physical attraction doesn't hold any appeal for me. I don't think Arnav is a stranger to physical intimacy like Khushi is. It will be unrealistic to see Arnav remaining celibate all his life till marrying Khushi. So the thing that matters is what Arnav feels for Khushi and how different it is then his previous affairs. So no I don't want to see Arnav's fantasy coming true. Not so soon! I feel they still have miles to go to bridge the gap between them. I would love to see them fall in love with each other first!

    3. Whatever happens with Meera Raizada is absolutely not my concern!

    4. No. I don't wish Khushi to extend her trip and change her plans. I don't think anyone in Raizada family truly loved or cared for Dadi. Everyone is selfish including Arnav. He wants to be a priority in khushi's life and he too like his parents isn't much concerned about Dadi staying alone in her old age. He wants Khushi with him in USA. But I didn't see the same concerne and stubbornness for Dadi. He fulfilled Dadi's dream. Simply because he has money but not time to share with Dadi. I honestly don't value what Arnav did for Dadi much. Because just like he said he did this not just for Dadi but for Khushi too. Maybe to impress her or win her back! That lowers him in my eyes! He should have been the one to care for Dadi instead of Khushi. People need your time not money. Nobody ever tried to know what Dadi really wanted. She wanted her family! She didn't choose to stay alone. The way I see she was forced to stay alone because her children were not willing to stay with her. Just visiting her for sometime doesn't make Arnav a good grandson. It gives me glimpses of his father. His father too after getting married have chosen his wife over his mother and his son is doing the same now. I don't know what exactly happened between Dadi and Meera Raizada but Dadi needed her family!


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  23. I usually don't imagine the next track of the fictions because it spoils the fun! But let's try and see what I imagine in upcoming tracks!

    1. Khushi should be angry! And Arnav needs to know how badly his dearest wife was treated for the very first time in her Sasural?
    I am sure Naina did this intentionally. But she still has my sympathy. I am sure it is difficult for Naina too to SHARE her friend Arnav with someone else. If it's true that she had feelings for Arnav then her heartbreak is
    Imaginable. Khushi needs to know that just like her Arnav too had a different life before coming to India and people like Naina were a part of it. I hope out of jealousy she don't overreact and embarras herself.

    2. Sex without emotional intimacy is not my cup of tea. Having sex just because of a mere physical attraction doesn't hold any appeal for me. I don't think Arnav is a stranger to physical intimacy like Khushi is. It will be unrealistic to see Arnav remaining celibate all his life till marrying Khushi. So the thing that matters is what Arnav feels for Khushi and how different it is then his previous affairs. So no I don't want to see Arnav's fantasy coming true. Not so soon! I feel they still have miles to go to bridge the gap between them. I would love to see them fall in love with each other first!

    3. Whatever happens with Meera Raizada is absolutely not my concern!

    4. No. I don't wish Khushi to extend her trip and change her plans. I don't think anyone in Raizada family truly loved or cared for Dadi. Everyone is selfish including Arnav. He wants to be a priority in khushi's life and he too like his parents isn't much concerned about Dadi staying alone in her old age. He wants Khushi with him in USA. But I didn't see the same concerne and stubbornness for Dadi. He fulfilled Dadi's dream. Simply because he has money but not time to share with Dadi. I honestly don't value what Arnav did for Dadi much. Because just like he said he did this not just for Dadi but for Khushi too. Maybe to impress her or win her back! That lowers him in my eyes! He should have been the one to care for Dadi instead of Khushi. People need your time not money. Nobody ever tried to know what Dadi really wanted. She wanted her family! She didn't choose to stay alone. The way I see she was forced to stay alone because her children were not willing to stay with her. Just visiting her for sometime doesn't make Arnav a good grandson. It gives me glimpses of his father. His father too after getting married have chosen his wife over his mother and his son is doing the same now. I don't know what exactly happened between Dadi and Meera Raizada but Dadi needed her family!


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    1. Ur 1st, 3rd,4th and half of 3rd are correct and valid until the celibate thing of arnav... Ur 3rd point, what does it means tht its unrealistic for arnav to be celibate till marriage? Does it mean its ok or better say, arnav shud not be a celibate and loyal for his future better half? Why? Bcoz he is a MAN!!! And they supposed to sleep around bcoz they gotta ryt to for being a MAN with needs nd hormones!!!������������... But you didn't say this for khushi! Why? Doesn't it also impossible for an adult woman to also be a celibate? Doesn't she also is a human with needs and hormones? Why she shud be a celibate till marriage! Only to give herself to a non-celibate man!...WOW������������ it amaze me how can ppl STILL have double standards for man and woman in this more advance and literate society...PATRIARCHAL SOCIETY ������������

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    3. It amazes me how people perceive views and opinions differently. I would love to clarify few things because your allegations are quite serious and I feel you misinterpreted my views totally.

      1. Arnav was in relationships with few women before. At least the story so far suggest that. It's impossible to imagine a person like ASR born and brought up in a modern world like USA would remain celibate when he has a girlfriend. It's so obvious for two mature adults in consensual relationships to hug, kiss and have sex with each other. Physical intimacy is an integral part of today's relationships. Why to deny that? Arnav is a young successful businessman and he had his own personal life before coming to India and falling in love with Khushi. In the original show Ipkknd too it was shown that ASR was no stranger to physical intimacy. He had few girlfriends like Sheetal Kapoor and Lavanya Kashyap before meeting Khushi. Not to forget that he wanted to be in a live in relationship with Lavanya and he was fighting against his family for the same reason. For a person like Arnav its easy to enjoy sex without much emotional involvement. Remember he didn't believe in love. So why to assume he will wait to fall in love one day and remain celibate for his future wife? I think this denial of Arnav's intimate life with other women comes from the childish expectations of many fans that he should love only Khushi and Khushi should be his first and the last.

      2. I don't have anything against women being sexually active before marriage. It's a very personal choice. But here in this story Khushi is shown to be brought up in the strong guardianship of a very traditional person like Dadi that too in a society like India. I am assuming Khushi to be celibate simply because she has been brought up in a very traditional ways by Dadi. For a person like Khushi it's difficult to get into sexual relationship without emotional involvement. So in short these are just my opinions about these two characters.

      I am a feminist too and I don't expect women to live their lives as per the ideals of conventional patriarchal societies. So it's not fair to judge a person according to your own interpretations of an opinion which can have a different meaning.


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  24. Oh Di you won't believe I have written few shots being inspired from your story. No copying don't be worried ����. And about new thoughts these keeps on coming. And to tell you the truth your and my brain works complete opposite. I'll make any serious situation funny lol. These stories of yours are real stress buster Di. Especially when you have your exam dancing around you. Lots of love Di.
    I don't want to guess anything now as nowadays my brain is in complete exam mood.

    One question I sooo want to ask. Di you draft your story daily. Or you you'll write in flow and break it in parts. Do reply if you got time. Small writer here����

    Once again love you alot. Never stop writing. You are a blessing.

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    1. I draft partwise daily.. based on which fiction I have to post that day. :)

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    2. Heyyyy when will you upload yotbm3. Been reloading blog since morning. Please upload. I hope it's a romantic update

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    3. Thank you so much for replying Di.Will be waiting for your update. Lots of love.

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