Chapter 54
“As your wife?” she repeated. Arnav didn’t move neither let her make movements. He had held her close to his body, his heart racing at the thought of not seeing her for one whole month. “Are you proposing me to marry you?”
Yes, he was. Arnav had no plans to force her for the marriage yet but now that she had decided to move out of Gupta Mansion, this was the only place he wanted her to stay.. with him. Nani might not approve Khushi staying in Shantivan without marriage, which is why he put forth the wedding idea.
“That’s the next stop after engagement” he replied. “We had to marry someday, why not now?”
Khushi almost panicked seeing the confidence on his face.
“Or should I say you still have commitment issues”
“It’s not me I am worried about, it’s you” she explained. “Marriage is obviously in my list but not when the situation is so gruesome. Lavanya and NK are still apart. I am yet to earn Lavanya and Nani’s trust. I don’t think they will willingly participate in our wedding if we chose to make it happen. And because you take my side and not theirs, I don’t want you to be in trouble. It’s your family and I don’t want to cause a rift between you all”
“Fair enough” he nodded. “Then we will stay together without marriage. I cannot take the risk of you living alone. Never”
“Same city Arnav.. what’s the harm?”
“This topic is closed” he muttered watching behind her. Lavanya reached them with the file Arnav was here to collect.
He didn’t know if Lavanya had heard their conversation but until he and Khushi took a decision on it, sharing this topic with others had to be on hold.
“You took your medicines?” he asked his sister who nodded briefly. “Good. Be ready at evening for the party”
“ASR, I don’t think I want to attend that party” Lavanya stated.
“It’s Aman’s birthday. He has specially invited us. If you don’t come, he will be upset. Let’s not spoil his day. If you don’t feel good, we will come back soon”
Khushi recalled she and NK too had got this invitation and they were attending the Party in Aman’s Villa tonight. Ruby was the host and she had organized the whole event for Aman.
“Fine” Lavanya smiled agreeing to go.
Arnav gave her a gentle hug before dragging Khushi out with him. He opened her car door to get inside.
“You cannot do this” she debated and he knew it was about their discussion on marriage.
“Two things” he snapped pinning her to the car door. “Moving out of your own house because you think Lavanya wants so, is stupid. And second, you are no longer single. Such decisions are to be taken as a family. I AM YOUR FAMILY and we will decide it together. I know you want to sort NK and Lavanya’s problems, but that doesn’t mean you have to walk out of your own house”
“Didn’t you see? She hates me”
“Did she tell you that? Did she use that exact word?
Khushi was blank. Arnav calmed himself because whatever he was going to explain her now, needed him to focus.
“Khushi, we often misjudge people and their intentions. Yes, Lavanya is disturbed but she doesn’t hate you. She knows how much you mean to me and to NK. She can never hate you.”
A thought flashed in her head. He was probably right.
“Communicate to people Khushi. Don’t presume, don’t let their actions speak but their words. Don’t impose your decisions on others, prove it to them why they should accept your choices. I know sharing your feelings, your pain to someone has always been difficult to you. It took you a lot of effort to open up to me but that’s not enough. Nani, Lavanya and NK also deserve to hear what you feel about them. None of them hates you Khushi. It’s just in your mind”
“Damn” she groaned, fisting her fingers. “I seriously need a counselor”
Arnav watched her in disbelief.
“What am I here for?” he asked.
Khushi’s arms automatically wrapped around his torso and she pulled him to her.
“You make everything sound so simple”
Arnav grazed her face.
“You have complicated your life by your own thoughts and actions. I am not going to fight your battles Khushi. I know you can fight them on your own. All I want is to guide you fight it rightly. Do you trust me?”
“I don’t think I have ever trusted anyone else in my life like you” she purred. This man was driving her crazy by his words, his thoughts, his touch. She could give him her life, if he asked.
“Then listen to me very carefully. If you step out of that house, you are staying with me in Shantivan, with or without marriage is your choice. In both the cases, even if we have to put a fight with the world, we will”
Tears brimmed in her eyes which she blinked away giving him a tight hug. He was ready to fight for her and now it was her duty to ensure that option never arises. As he said, she had to communicate with the family to let them know what she feels about all the mistakes she committed so far and though that’s never going to be easy, she would do it. For him..
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Gupta Office
When Khushi reached office, Mrs. Pinto informed her about Arnav’s Nani waiting to see her. Khushi was dazed to know Nani had come to her office. She walked herself to the waiting room where Nani was seated. The moment she entered the room, Nani stood up from the leather couch and smiled. It was hard to predict what got her here but Khushi didn’t leave a chance to welcome her. They were meeting each other after more than a month. She immediately leaned down to take her blessings and Nani didn’t hesitate to bless her either.
“If I knew you were coming here, I would have come sooner” she mentioned.
“I had been to the temple and the Priest offered Prasad, which I thought should be shared with all my grandchildren”
Khushi felt a pang in her heart.
“Lets.. lets talk in my cabin. Please come” she led Nani to her cabin and got her comfortable on the sofa. She even ordered some tea for them. Nani offered her the Prasad.
“Where is Nandakishore?”
“I will call him” Khushi immediately picked the intercom and asked Mrs. Pinto send NK in her cabin.
“He was out to meet a client. That Boy is finally taking work seriously. You should see him lead the meetings these days, makes me proud”
“He is making us all proud” Nani replied. NK joined them in few minutes and was equally surprised to find Nani here. He touched her feet and the first thing he asked was about Lavanya.
“She is doing fine” Nani replied. “I heard you are excelling at work”
NK shrugged. There was no joy on his face.
“Arnav keeps talking about his work and efforts at home and I have seen the joy on Lavanya’s face too. She is proud of you; she just wouldn’t tell it yet”
Nani’s statement brought a smile on his lips.
“I knew you had that spark. You just needed a push Nandakishore. Fortunately, or unfortunately, the distance from Lavanya and the coldness in your relationship has given you that push to focus on Business”
Whilst NK was disheartened, Khushi zipped her lips. But her silence and her inability to communicate her feelings with people had put her in enough dark zone so far. Arnav had guided her to do things rightly this time. So, she decided to speak up.
“I am sorry for what happened” Khushi began. “My ego drove me so high that I stopped drawing lines between the righteous things to do and the evil”
“I know what happened Khushi” Nani replied.
“No, you don’t” she interrupted. “You don’t know what levels I crossed to force Arnav agree to sign such a contract with me. He was just protecting his sister’s dignity and happiness. I had no rights to bait on my brother’s love. It’s the most insensitive and inhumane thing to do. I had so much hatred in me for people who challenged me that I did all this madness”
NK was stunned. For the first time he was witnessing his sister confronting her mistakes.
“I didn’t have a problem with Lavanya but Arnav ever since he won the auction of Prem Nivas. That one loss, made me grudge over him so bad that I stopped judging my actions towards him and his family”
“Khush..” NK pressed her arm. “It’s past”
“Let me finish Kishu..” she urged. He shook his head and allowed her to continue. “When I got to know Kishu is dating Arnav’s sister, I even thought this was Arnav’s plan to dominate my life. I misbehaved with Lavanya when she was here”
NK recalled what had happened in the hospital when Khushi got to know Lavanya was pregnant.
“I thought the baby was part of Raizada’s conspiracy and once again without talking about it to Kishu… I even questioned if that baby was really my brother’s or not”
Nani shut her eyes in disbelief.
“Arnav had to slap me.. which he did. And once again my pride was bruised”
Tears welled in her eyes but this time NK himself didn’t sit quiet.
“I deserved a slap too Khush.. I didn’t stand up for the woman I loved. At least not at the right time. Maybe that’s why Lavanya thinks I don’t deserve her. That’s why she… she has put this distance between us”
Nani who was just a listener so far, finally spoke.
“You both have wronged not just Lavanya and Arnav, but each other too” she stated turning to NK. “Protecting your sister from harms way or people’s accusations was right but only standing for her and not the woman you loved was totally your mistake”
She then turned to Khushi.
“You parented your younger brother but your pampering made him weak Khushi. He judged things keeping only you in the frame. He neglected his responsibilities for long and he took things for granted thinking you would cover up his mistakes”
I know, Khushi mouthed, feeling awful of her actions. Nani reached for her hand and patted it.
“I keep telling this to Arnav and Lavanya that mistakes don’t come for free. They come with a learning. I hope you two have got yours”
Khushi nodded and so did NK.
“You are lucky Khushi that you got a man like Arnav. He has accepted you with the darkness you had and Nandakishore, you have to be smart enough to handle your marriage without the intrusion of your sister and brother-in-law in it. If you could love a woman at your risk, you could also hold on to that love without needing other’s support”
Once again, Nani’s advice to them motivated the siblings.
“I will” he promised.
“Good. Now cheer up you both, pull up your socks and lead your personal lives” she added.
“Thank you” Khushi pressed a kiss on Nani’s palm. “For everything”
Nani hugged her hard.
“Be heroes of your lives and never remember to apologize when you go wrong because that doesn’t make you small. It only proves you are human”
When Khushi pulled away from the hug, there was a smile on her face. She already felt like a heavy weight was lifted off her shoulders. Talking to Nani and taking an advice from such an experienced woman was a gift she never wished to miss.
“But we still envy one thing” Khushi stated wiping her tears. “We took too long to find you Nani”
NK chuckled followed by Nani who agreed to that.
“Now you both have me, don’t you?”
“Yup. No more complains and grudges” NK answered. “Only happy days ahead. You know talking and hearing all this from you, I have got an idea in my mind. I know how to convince Lavanya and woo her back”
“That’s great. Go win her” Nani blessed him again. The Gupta siblings dropped Nani back till her car and waited until the vehicle left the premises.
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Evening
“Many Many Happy Returns of the day, birthday boy” Arnav hugged Aman and patted his back.
“Thanks for coming” Aman replied. “Especially you” he said turning to Lavanya who hugged him too. “And you too” he looked at her belly.
Lavanya smiled.
“When is the big date you said?”
“Seven more weeks” Arnav cuddled Lavanya from the side. Her pregnancy had been smooth so far but not on the emotional side.
“Can’t wait to know if it’s a nephew or niece” Arnav added.
“Same here Arnav. We have never been Uncles, have we?”
The three laughed at it but Lavanya stiffened suddenly when she saw NK and Khushi entering the Villa. Arnav didn’t move away from her though he passed a quick smile to his fiancée who returned his smile with the same warmth. Nani told them today how Khushi confronted her about that contract thing and even apologized for it. He couldn’t be prouder.
“I love taking birthday wishes. Let me take a few more from the Guptas and be right back” Aman said before striding to the Gupta siblings.
“You won’t go?” Lavanya raised her head to meet her brother’s eyes. “You don’t need to attend me. I can look after myself”
“How about we four stick together? Like old times?”
“That’s not happening ASR.. You and Nani are too nice to forgive people, I am not. Especially to those who have hurt you”
“La..” he pulled her closer. “Do I look hurt now?” he sincerely asked.
No, he didn’t.
“You look lovesick, totally smitten and madly in love with her”
“Which I am” he had no qualms to accept that. “Now don’t ask me why? It’s a feeling.. comes from here” he pointed to his heart.
After a long silence, she exhaled. She might have her own uncertainties, but if her brother loved Khushi so much, she would never come in between them.
“I didn’t ask her to move out of the Gupta Mansion” she clarified.
“I know. That’s her decision and I have told her what the consequences would be”
“Consequences?”
“She will stay with me.. married or without it” he declared.
Lavanya was startled at his statement but the determination in his eyes zipped her lips.
“I need to use the washroom” I will be right back”
Arnav was about to walk her till the washroom but she denied. NK and Khushi were little away from the two, talking to Ruby but NK’s eyes had been stalking his wife. Now that she was alone and heading away, he decided to make his move. Whatever differences he had with Lavanya, he promised himself to sort them all tonight..
To be Continued.
“Fair enough” he nodded. “Then we will stay together without marriage. I cannot take the risk of you living alone. Never”
“Same city Arnav.. what’s the harm?”
“This topic is closed” he muttered watching behind her. Lavanya reached them with the file Arnav was here to collect.
He didn’t know if Lavanya had heard their conversation but until he and Khushi took a decision on it, sharing this topic with others had to be on hold.
“You took your medicines?” he asked his sister who nodded briefly. “Good. Be ready at evening for the party”
“ASR, I don’t think I want to attend that party” Lavanya stated.
“It’s Aman’s birthday. He has specially invited us. If you don’t come, he will be upset. Let’s not spoil his day. If you don’t feel good, we will come back soon”
Khushi recalled she and NK too had got this invitation and they were attending the Party in Aman’s Villa tonight. Ruby was the host and she had organized the whole event for Aman.
“Fine” Lavanya smiled agreeing to go.
Arnav gave her a gentle hug before dragging Khushi out with him. He opened her car door to get inside.
“You cannot do this” she debated and he knew it was about their discussion on marriage.
“Two things” he snapped pinning her to the car door. “Moving out of your own house because you think Lavanya wants so, is stupid. And second, you are no longer single. Such decisions are to be taken as a family. I AM YOUR FAMILY and we will decide it together. I know you want to sort NK and Lavanya’s problems, but that doesn’t mean you have to walk out of your own house”
“Didn’t you see? She hates me”
“Did she tell you that? Did she use that exact word?
Khushi was blank. Arnav calmed himself because whatever he was going to explain her now, needed him to focus.
“Khushi, we often misjudge people and their intentions. Yes, Lavanya is disturbed but she doesn’t hate you. She knows how much you mean to me and to NK. She can never hate you.”
A thought flashed in her head. He was probably right.
“Communicate to people Khushi. Don’t presume, don’t let their actions speak but their words. Don’t impose your decisions on others, prove it to them why they should accept your choices. I know sharing your feelings, your pain to someone has always been difficult to you. It took you a lot of effort to open up to me but that’s not enough. Nani, Lavanya and NK also deserve to hear what you feel about them. None of them hates you Khushi. It’s just in your mind”
“Damn” she groaned, fisting her fingers. “I seriously need a counselor”
Arnav watched her in disbelief.
“What am I here for?” he asked.
Khushi’s arms automatically wrapped around his torso and she pulled him to her.
“You make everything sound so simple”
Arnav grazed her face.
“You have complicated your life by your own thoughts and actions. I am not going to fight your battles Khushi. I know you can fight them on your own. All I want is to guide you fight it rightly. Do you trust me?”
“I don’t think I have ever trusted anyone else in my life like you” she purred. This man was driving her crazy by his words, his thoughts, his touch. She could give him her life, if he asked.
“Then listen to me very carefully. If you step out of that house, you are staying with me in Shantivan, with or without marriage is your choice. In both the cases, even if we have to put a fight with the world, we will”
Tears brimmed in her eyes which she blinked away giving him a tight hug. He was ready to fight for her and now it was her duty to ensure that option never arises. As he said, she had to communicate with the family to let them know what she feels about all the mistakes she committed so far and though that’s never going to be easy, she would do it. For him..
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Gupta Office
When Khushi reached office, Mrs. Pinto informed her about Arnav’s Nani waiting to see her. Khushi was dazed to know Nani had come to her office. She walked herself to the waiting room where Nani was seated. The moment she entered the room, Nani stood up from the leather couch and smiled. It was hard to predict what got her here but Khushi didn’t leave a chance to welcome her. They were meeting each other after more than a month. She immediately leaned down to take her blessings and Nani didn’t hesitate to bless her either.
“If I knew you were coming here, I would have come sooner” she mentioned.
“I had been to the temple and the Priest offered Prasad, which I thought should be shared with all my grandchildren”
Khushi felt a pang in her heart.
“Lets.. lets talk in my cabin. Please come” she led Nani to her cabin and got her comfortable on the sofa. She even ordered some tea for them. Nani offered her the Prasad.
“Where is Nandakishore?”
“I will call him” Khushi immediately picked the intercom and asked Mrs. Pinto send NK in her cabin.
“He was out to meet a client. That Boy is finally taking work seriously. You should see him lead the meetings these days, makes me proud”
“He is making us all proud” Nani replied. NK joined them in few minutes and was equally surprised to find Nani here. He touched her feet and the first thing he asked was about Lavanya.
“She is doing fine” Nani replied. “I heard you are excelling at work”
NK shrugged. There was no joy on his face.
“Arnav keeps talking about his work and efforts at home and I have seen the joy on Lavanya’s face too. She is proud of you; she just wouldn’t tell it yet”
Nani’s statement brought a smile on his lips.
“I knew you had that spark. You just needed a push Nandakishore. Fortunately, or unfortunately, the distance from Lavanya and the coldness in your relationship has given you that push to focus on Business”
Whilst NK was disheartened, Khushi zipped her lips. But her silence and her inability to communicate her feelings with people had put her in enough dark zone so far. Arnav had guided her to do things rightly this time. So, she decided to speak up.
“I am sorry for what happened” Khushi began. “My ego drove me so high that I stopped drawing lines between the righteous things to do and the evil”
“I know what happened Khushi” Nani replied.
“No, you don’t” she interrupted. “You don’t know what levels I crossed to force Arnav agree to sign such a contract with me. He was just protecting his sister’s dignity and happiness. I had no rights to bait on my brother’s love. It’s the most insensitive and inhumane thing to do. I had so much hatred in me for people who challenged me that I did all this madness”
NK was stunned. For the first time he was witnessing his sister confronting her mistakes.
“I didn’t have a problem with Lavanya but Arnav ever since he won the auction of Prem Nivas. That one loss, made me grudge over him so bad that I stopped judging my actions towards him and his family”
“Khush..” NK pressed her arm. “It’s past”
“Let me finish Kishu..” she urged. He shook his head and allowed her to continue. “When I got to know Kishu is dating Arnav’s sister, I even thought this was Arnav’s plan to dominate my life. I misbehaved with Lavanya when she was here”
NK recalled what had happened in the hospital when Khushi got to know Lavanya was pregnant.
“I thought the baby was part of Raizada’s conspiracy and once again without talking about it to Kishu… I even questioned if that baby was really my brother’s or not”
Nani shut her eyes in disbelief.
“Arnav had to slap me.. which he did. And once again my pride was bruised”
Tears welled in her eyes but this time NK himself didn’t sit quiet.
“I deserved a slap too Khush.. I didn’t stand up for the woman I loved. At least not at the right time. Maybe that’s why Lavanya thinks I don’t deserve her. That’s why she… she has put this distance between us”
Nani who was just a listener so far, finally spoke.
“You both have wronged not just Lavanya and Arnav, but each other too” she stated turning to NK. “Protecting your sister from harms way or people’s accusations was right but only standing for her and not the woman you loved was totally your mistake”
She then turned to Khushi.
“You parented your younger brother but your pampering made him weak Khushi. He judged things keeping only you in the frame. He neglected his responsibilities for long and he took things for granted thinking you would cover up his mistakes”
I know, Khushi mouthed, feeling awful of her actions. Nani reached for her hand and patted it.
“I keep telling this to Arnav and Lavanya that mistakes don’t come for free. They come with a learning. I hope you two have got yours”
Khushi nodded and so did NK.
“You are lucky Khushi that you got a man like Arnav. He has accepted you with the darkness you had and Nandakishore, you have to be smart enough to handle your marriage without the intrusion of your sister and brother-in-law in it. If you could love a woman at your risk, you could also hold on to that love without needing other’s support”
Once again, Nani’s advice to them motivated the siblings.
“I will” he promised.
“Good. Now cheer up you both, pull up your socks and lead your personal lives” she added.
“Thank you” Khushi pressed a kiss on Nani’s palm. “For everything”
Nani hugged her hard.
“Be heroes of your lives and never remember to apologize when you go wrong because that doesn’t make you small. It only proves you are human”
When Khushi pulled away from the hug, there was a smile on her face. She already felt like a heavy weight was lifted off her shoulders. Talking to Nani and taking an advice from such an experienced woman was a gift she never wished to miss.
“But we still envy one thing” Khushi stated wiping her tears. “We took too long to find you Nani”
NK chuckled followed by Nani who agreed to that.
“Now you both have me, don’t you?”
“Yup. No more complains and grudges” NK answered. “Only happy days ahead. You know talking and hearing all this from you, I have got an idea in my mind. I know how to convince Lavanya and woo her back”
“That’s great. Go win her” Nani blessed him again. The Gupta siblings dropped Nani back till her car and waited until the vehicle left the premises.
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Evening
“Many Many Happy Returns of the day, birthday boy” Arnav hugged Aman and patted his back.
“Thanks for coming” Aman replied. “Especially you” he said turning to Lavanya who hugged him too. “And you too” he looked at her belly.
Lavanya smiled.
“When is the big date you said?”
“Seven more weeks” Arnav cuddled Lavanya from the side. Her pregnancy had been smooth so far but not on the emotional side.
“Can’t wait to know if it’s a nephew or niece” Arnav added.
“Same here Arnav. We have never been Uncles, have we?”
The three laughed at it but Lavanya stiffened suddenly when she saw NK and Khushi entering the Villa. Arnav didn’t move away from her though he passed a quick smile to his fiancée who returned his smile with the same warmth. Nani told them today how Khushi confronted her about that contract thing and even apologized for it. He couldn’t be prouder.
“I love taking birthday wishes. Let me take a few more from the Guptas and be right back” Aman said before striding to the Gupta siblings.
“You won’t go?” Lavanya raised her head to meet her brother’s eyes. “You don’t need to attend me. I can look after myself”
“How about we four stick together? Like old times?”
“That’s not happening ASR.. You and Nani are too nice to forgive people, I am not. Especially to those who have hurt you”
“La..” he pulled her closer. “Do I look hurt now?” he sincerely asked.
No, he didn’t.
“You look lovesick, totally smitten and madly in love with her”
“Which I am” he had no qualms to accept that. “Now don’t ask me why? It’s a feeling.. comes from here” he pointed to his heart.
After a long silence, she exhaled. She might have her own uncertainties, but if her brother loved Khushi so much, she would never come in between them.
“I didn’t ask her to move out of the Gupta Mansion” she clarified.
“I know. That’s her decision and I have told her what the consequences would be”
“Consequences?”
“She will stay with me.. married or without it” he declared.
Lavanya was startled at his statement but the determination in his eyes zipped her lips.
“I need to use the washroom” I will be right back”
Arnav was about to walk her till the washroom but she denied. NK and Khushi were little away from the two, talking to Ruby but NK’s eyes had been stalking his wife. Now that she was alone and heading away, he decided to make his move. Whatever differences he had with Lavanya, he promised himself to sort them all tonight..
To be Continued.
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EXCERPT 3
Why is she hell bent to make me jealous tonight? I am jealous, yeah. I can admit it to anyone, and I am sure it’s written all over my face. She denied dancing with me earlier and now she changed her mood for Advay? How dare she? I am giving her signals that I like her and yet she is missing them all? I should probably talk openly now. Ria is right. In 2 days, she will be gone and I want her to leave this place promising me we will be in touch in every way. I have conditions laid in my mind already. I like to be planned.
Condition 1 – We will exchange numbers and I can call her whenever I like. This includes both voice and Video calls. It’s hard only to hear her voice and not see her.
Condition 2 – She will not see anyone, as in date anyone. If she wants to go out and needs a date, I am going to make myself available for her, doesn’t matter which city or country she is, I will be there for her.
Condition 3 – She will take up every event Offer from Dewan Group of Industries so that I will get to see her as much as possible.
I am about to lay my Condition number 4 when I see Tarini laughing heartily. She looks little high to me. The Wine effects? Advay joins her laugh. I am not going to stand here and watch them flirt with each other. I put my drink away and make way to the dance floor again.
I am about to lay my Condition number 4 when I see Tarini laughing heartily. She looks little high to me. The Wine effects? Advay joins her laugh. I am not going to stand here and watch them flirt with each other. I put my drink away and make way to the dance floor again.
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Great update.. finally all those who complained that Khushi never apologized they finally got the apology.. I hope they don't have anymore issues ahead now ... Keep up the great work madhu
ReplyDeleteAgain started with your gyan. Why dont you keep your comments limited to update and not mention about others?
DeleteYo may find it hard to accept but we all have DO HAVE our own hands to type our comment, you dont need to tell what we feel about update. Stop trying to insinuate that Madhu changed it for some readers and it wasn't part of original plot.
Sorry to burst your bubble once more...this story is not Khushi's eulogy so don't get surprised with such scenes coz Khushi, the protagonist/heroine here is human not God as you thought and she is allowed to err and correct herself as mentioned in the update
AND AFTER THIS BULLISH COMMENT IF SOMEONE LIKE ME REPLIES TO YOU, YOU 'LL CRY FOUL, WHEN YOU CLEARLY KNOW IT IS YOU WHO STARTED IT IN FIRST PLACE.
COMMENT ABOUT UPDATE NOT YOUR FELLOW READERS...IT 'LL BE THE BEST WAY TO MAINTAIN PEACE.
First.. I can't keep my comments limited to the update because you too are busy writing on others comments about the update.. just scroll down a few comments to check what I mean..
DeleteSecondly, anyone can tell that Madhu did edit this chapter by adding the apologizing part because of you and your SO CALLED comments..
Third, kindly stop influencing the author with your nonsense thoughts because we're here to read her written story and not your stupid influence.. and if you really wish to show stories where we learn right and wrong then kindly start your own blog instead of influencing other authors ideas..
PS: you're lucky that Madhu is a very kind author cause if I was in her place I WOULD HAVE BLOCKED YOU FROM READING MY BLOG STORIES AND SPREAD YOUR STUPID THOUGHTS.
Are you really that dense or pretend like one? You mean to say all the Anon comments are written by me? You need to learn basics of commenting then.
DeleteA suggestion : Why dont you keep your beautiful assumptions about other readers to yourself and make this blog a peaceful place?
2nd thing, you feel Madhu has edited this chapter only bcoz it doesnt suit your taste!
What should have Khushi done instead? Boasted it all before Nani and Nani should have thumped her back waah Khushi beta!!! You abuse so beautifully...do chaar gaali humko bhi do...hum Nani hain? Or you think it could have remained hidden forever?
Ever wondered why it is so indigestible to you? Let me tell you,
In a research, it was concluded that "People who have nothing substantial to say, dont admit mistakes and create unnecessary ruckus on BLOGS find it hard to say sorry"
Rang a bell with you, right?
Its ok! You 'll learn.
Now, go back to first chapter and read the story since beginning...it wont take much time...and I am sure you 'll realise how stupid/lame you sound at present. This chapter unlike you think, is completely part of story, blended well...as you can see most of the comments. Now, dont say, I have written on behalf of others too and not just for all Anon ones as you think with your Abraino!!!
Third thing, keep your nonsense/garbage whatever you think your thoughts are...about my comments to yourself. I, as far as I remember, didnt ask you to have an opinion about them.
Also, your level of hypocrisy is sky-rocketing! Everyone on this blog knows how Khushi-worshippers literally bully author, readers and arm-twist to try n have their way. But sadly for you, it has seldom worked. And your trying to bully me here is clearly childish and or even Trumpish if I may say.
SORRY TO BREAK YOUR DREAM BUBBLE...THIS IS NOT YOUR BLOG...SO KEEP YOUR IDIOTIC, HATEFUL THINGS ABOUT ME TO YOURSELF.
YOUR THREATS REEK OF BORDERLINE PSHYCHOSIS. DEAR, HARD FACT IS - THIS IS NOT YOUR BLOG.
AND YEAH, YOU ARE LUCKIER THAN ME, THANKS TO MADHU BEING A KIND SOUL OTHERWISE VIEWERS LIKE YOU WITH SELECTIVE LENSES WOULD HAVE BEEN THROWN OUT ON DAY ONE WIH HE WAY YOU BULLY HER.
P.S.: MY BLOG ALREADY EXISTS AND YOU CLEARLY KNOW WHY YOU HAVE BEEN THROWN OUT WHEN I DID PEST CONTROL THERE.
DONT THINK TOO MUCH AND TYPE ANOTHER HATEFUL REPLY COZ YOU KNOW I WONT HESITATE TO GIVE IT BACK TO YOU. BETTER IS, GIVE REST TO YOUR NON-EXISTENT BRAIN. IT 'LL HELP MAINTAIN PEACE HERE AND I CAN ALSO DO THINGS THAT ARE WORTHWHILE.
Hahaaha.. if you're so right then why are you asking me not to type another reply to you..
DeleteIt clearly shows that Madhu has edited this part as she surely did not plan this apology part this was before.. I'm sure she had some other plan of writing it but due to dumbasses like you she had to edit it in the current chapter..
And I highly doubt that your blog already exists because a negative and insane person like you who is so free to write such long comments on others blogs cannot have a blog because if you did you would have been busy spending your time there and not here..
And my dear reader I have no interest in reading your blog even if it exists cause reading anything written by a negative person like you would just either depress me or make me a complete shallow person like you.. whereas reading Madhus blog gives not only me but every reader happiness and all sorts of good vibes..
And did you even need to perform a pest control? Cause I'm sure readers who ever even once came across your blog must have left the exact next instance not being able to take such negative writing..
And the likes on my comments verses yours shows who Madhu should throw out of her blog which seems to be YOU However you're lucky that she won't do that due to being a good hearted person that she is..
Lastly.. if you wish to reply to this please feel free.. cause i unlike you am not afraid to read your feedback cause I know I'm right and you're wrong.
I was so right. You are really dense!
DeleteThe only reason I asked you to not reply is bcoz I already knew it would still be full ONLY OF GARBAGE THAT YOU ARE.
LAST THING, IN MY REPLY, I TOLD YOU THE REASON BEHIND THE SCENE BUT AGAIN LIKE OUR EXCHANGE IN LAST CHAPTER, YOU HAVE NO WORDS/REASONS TO SUPPORT YOUR FOOLISH ASSUMPTIONS.
SO YOU KNOW WHAT, SHOVE 'EM UP YOUR...(YOU KNOW WANT) BCOZ YOU ARE THE REAL DUMBASS HERE.
YOU YOURSELF KNOW ITS YOU WHO IS SPREADING NEGATIVITY ON THE BLOG BY SPEWING YOUR VITRIOL AGAINST OTHER READERS.
DON'T GIVE ME YOUR TAMPERED UPVOTES AND DOWNVOTES - YOUR HARD-WORK OF SO MANY REFRESHES...PRESS 'EM AS MANY TIMES AS YOU WANT TILL MADHU ATTACHES 'EM WITH SIGN-IN. YOU ARE LUCKY THAT TILL THEN YOU CAN DELUDE YOURSELF BY EXPLOITING THIS LOOPHOLE AS MUCH AS YOU CAN. YOU ARE CLEARLY LUCKIER THAN ME.
PLEASE STOP INSULTING MADHU BY USING HER NAME IN SINGLE SENTENE WITH YOURS. SHE DOESNT BELONG TO YOUR CATEGORY.
I ALREADY TOLD YOU...WHAT I DID WITH YOU ON MY BLOG...IT WOULDNT HAVE HAPPENED IF YOU DIDNT HAVE INTEREST IN READING IT...SO CUT THE CRAP. AND TILL PEOPLE LIKE YOU EXIST, PEST CONTROL 'LL ALWAYS BE NEEDED.
TO BREAK ANOTHER OF YOUR BUBBLES...THERE ARE MANY WRITERS HERE WHO READ HER STORIES AND GIVE GENUINE FEEDBACK. OUR BOTTOMS DONT START ITCHING WITH ONE APOLOGY FROM A CHARACTER. NOR WE DO BHAKTI OF ANY SPECIFIC CHARACTERS.
YOUR ANOTHER ASSUMPTION THAT A PERSON WHO HAS HIS OWN BLOG CANT VISIT OTHERS AGAIN SHOWS YOUR LEVEL OF MATURITY.
LAST THING, ME AFRAID OF A LITTLE PONY SOUNDS AS HOLLOW AS YOUR NON-EXISTENT BRAIN
YOU AGAIN N AGAIN HARPING ABOUT MADHU THROWING ME OUT IS SO STUPID.
IT SOUNDS LIKE...
IF I 'RE OWNER OF GOOGLE, I 'D THROW YOU OUT FROM BLOGGER!!!
AS LAME AS YOU YOURSELF ARE!!!
MY FEEDBACK FOR YOU(BCOZ YOU SAID YOU ARENT AFRAID) :
GROW UP KID!!!
SPARE ME FROM THESE MOMMY DUTIES...I HAVE BEEN DOING SINCE LAST CHAPTER.
PS : ALL THE DOWNVOTES ON YOUR COMMENTS MAY BE REAL...IF YOU YOURSELF ARENT DOING 'EM COZ YOU KNOW I M A VERY LAZY PERSON TO DO REPEATED REFRESH
DeleteI wouldn't have to refresh to dislike your comments because the fellow readers are already doing that and plus I have no time to waste like you..
DeleteAnd to BURST YOUR ONE GIANt BUBBLE all I need to say is read the lawful musings post and I'm sure you'll know where you stand in everyone's eyes.
PS: I wouldn't be arguing with you after this reply of mine.. as arguing with a fool makes them two and I wouldn't want to be one like you.
Thank you for the foul words you used and have a great life ahead..
And I forgot to mention one last thing.. i have never visited any of your blog's so stop your stupid lying and if your blog exists please do send me the link as id like to see how a blog from a person like you would be.. it'll be interesting to see and funny too.. and about throwing me out of your blog then I'm sure you've been thrown out of many already due to your negativity and hence not having an answer to my replies you keep mentioning it 😁
DeleteI FOR ONE HAVE NEVER BEEN TO YOUR BLOG SO STOP PRETENDING LIKE I HAD AND YOU'VE THROWN ME OUT 😁😁
DeleteLook at your foul words first! You are under great illusion if you still think it is bcoz of me that she wrote that note. She learly wrote is for both of us. Read her specific sentence that constructive criticism is welcome and ruckus that you created with me here is not.
DeleteRead your comment, you 'll find something on lines of dumb*** there.
Also she said something about this being her blog, so give up your fake ownership.
And last thing, you are only pretending to settle your itch not defending her story. And FYI, her story isnt weak that it needs your lame defence. Keep it with you.
Hereafter, I wont reply to you...no matter what comes out of your mouth. Enough time wasted, drama created.
May God bless you too.
Awesome Update. Hope NK and Lavanya sort out their differences. Nani is really sweet. Khushi and NK didn't had an elderly guidance. Nani nicely made them understand. Khushi is also changed who now value emotions. Arnav is right about getting married. Khushi wants to sort out NK Lavanya relationship first. Arnav is supporting Khushi nicely and is not ready to leave her.Arnav's wise advice of communication is nice. He understands Khushi and Khushi too trust him.Nani Khushi's meeting was nice. Nani also praised NK. Khushi confessing her mistakes and is feeling guilty. But Nani forgive them.Lavanya is still cold but glad that she won't come between Khushi Arnav. She is just hurt. Hope NK and Lavanya sort out their differences. Thanks for the Update😍😘
ReplyDeleteLavanya has so much ego , reason behind all these problems started with NK and her still she is blaming others
ReplyDeleteHahahahahahahahahahahaha
DeleteOh my God. It all started because khushi thought raizada's are conspiring against her. Hence, Lavanya and Arnav suffered.
What if someone enslaved your brother for 6 months to let a pregnant you marry her brother. Will you forgive her in a second?
DeleteIt is best when people own their mistakes, ask for forgiveness and move on to become better. Let khushi have that journey.
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ReplyDeleteGreat update 😘😘 waiting for yaadein 😐😐😐😐
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Update. Arnav proposed Khushi for marriage. He can't see her lonely. Khushi is trying to sort out the difference between NK and Lavanya and also want to win Nani's trust. Khushi knows family's worth and Arnav as expected is not ready to leave Khushi alone. Arnav nicely made Khushi understand that Lavanya is just upset and also want Khushi to open up and share her feelings. Khushi needed some body like Arnav to guide her and can bring her to the right track and is ready to fight for her. Nani came to meet Khushi and still consider Khushi and NK a part of family. Khushi praised NK and Nani also stated about Lavanya. Khushi finally confessed her mistakes of making Arnav doing horrible things. It's really courageous of her. Previously she had no idea on love and relationship and was driven by her ego . NK also shared his mistakes. Nani's wise advice that mistakes comes with learning will help the siblings in future. Nanis advice made Khushi feel light. Nani is a blessing in Khushi NK's life. Arnav looks excited for becoming an uncle. Nani shared everything with Arnav. Lavanya though acting cold understand her brother's emotions. Hope NK Lavanya sort out every thing. Lavanya's coldness and ego is affecting 3 lives. Waiting for YOTBM.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. Loved the way they both are bonding with each other.
ReplyDeleteNK will still remain a spineless man. Go die
ReplyDeleteMadhu i like how you handled this chapter. Most of my issues with last update have been resolved. But why didn't NK for once ask khushi why did she need to do all this? Why did she make him, Arnav and lavanya suffer?
ReplyDeleteI do want to see him telling asking his sister. I need character development
Otherwise between him and khushi,
He becomes the man who does not know how to marry lavanya when khushi isn't agreeing
The one who goes to Malaysis when his GF is wondering about their marriage and does n't talk to her
Who ran after his sister when he learnt how she enslaved his brother
And not for once asked her why?
It boils my blood to see this and i am so so angry right now
We need stories where we learn right and wrong not where we see how much wrong from a person is justified and how much is off limit.
My dear why don't you write this story instead of madhu? Cause I see you have a list of never ending complaints.
DeleteThat way will be the only way to end your complaints cause I see you have issues with every chapter and you find new things every time to complain about.. tomorrow even if NK stands up against his sister and stands up for his wife Lavanya and Arshi get married then you might come up with a new complaint that why did Arnav marry Khushi so soon without punishing her? I guess Madhu you should show in this story that Khushi keeps a distance between her and Arnav and the family to punish herself and cries and begs for the remaining chapter until our fellow reader is satisfied and approves of her being forgiven then we shall move ahead with the wedding and normal story..
DeleteHey Anonymous,
DeleteIf you have failed to notice my dear, the party scene has just started. Wait for things to unfold. It is not wise to dictate things to author esp. the way you are doing. Please keep patience and place your trust in author. Also try t understand things from other end too.
There must be a reason why you started reading the story, please keep that faith in author and dont pressurize her with specific demands.
For one narrative, one reader has diff. perspective from other. There are 100s of such readers. And none of 100 POVs maybe wrong. So please keep the patience and let the story progress organically.
I'm sure the author knows how to write her story.
DeleteWhy don't you try writing a story and show us how to write it better.
how she enslaved his brother in law*
ReplyDeleteGood update... Nani's advice is valuable... So Khushi & NK should put the same in action... Love this Arnav... Lavanya take your time to forget but too much....
ReplyDeleteAwesome 😎 update
ReplyDeleteNice
ReplyDeleteSuperb Update...What Madhu i thought we'll get to read what happen in the party but you stop it there only...Waiting for Next Part...
ReplyDeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update
ReplyDeleteMadhu pls update yaadein next part...plss..it's a humble request..whenever we requested u back to update u have always fulfilled our wish.we expect the same this time also...pretty plssssss😌😌😌😌
ReplyDeleteThis story showed us different type of people. There are people who will forgive the other even if they kill him. It’s a fact but such people are rare. Some will have a big ego and will want to win always. Some will not forgive easily. So we can’t complain about but it’s their own way of living. Sometimes people learn from their mistakes and trying correct themselves. But there are people who will repeat the same mistake even though they know the consequences. That’s how life goes on. I guess this story showed that part of the society. I don’t blame anyone here. Nice update sis! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAwesome thanks
ReplyDeleteFabulous one ❤️
ReplyDeleteLavanya really need to grow up.she is acting too stubborn to destroy everything.
ReplyDeleteI feel khushi has repented enough for her mistakes and the family should move on.
ReplyDeleteRecently the chapters are only filled with sorrow, guilt, etc. Looks like arnav and khushi's life is filled only with sadness and pain.
You are an awesome writer Madhu. Read marriage jitters in one go. Loved it. About this story, after reading todays update I have a feeling that you are forced to do some or other changes in the behaviour of otherwise beautifully depicted lifelike characters, which I dont enjoy. So taking a break from this story. Waiting for other updates.
ReplyDeleteSuperb...
ReplyDeleteLoved the way Arnav spoke to khushi n gave his support n he really is marvellous..
Wow nani too good..
Nk khushi both needed her advice..
Hope all goes well
I have been reading Madhu stories write from facebook page.... I have read a lot of her creations.... I trust her the way she writes and unfolds the story gradually is remarkable and interesting..... I find at present all her stories and work s awsome.... I donot have any complaints from her writing love you madhu From Shabih
ReplyDeleteAt last Khushi is on right track and in right mind
ReplyDeleteWonderful fabulous update dear
ReplyDeleteLovely update.
ReplyDeleteWonderful awesome update
ReplyDeleteWonderful update 🤩🥰👌👌 Really everyone should get a life partner like This Arnav he is soo understanding soo sensible soo caring soo protective soo damm loving and supportive and he is a full package every girl soo get a man like him and they we handled her and get Khushi understand to communicate and speak her heart out to her own people rather than only assuming to things from ur side it was a go ood advice from him 🥰 .... And i am glad she said all her mistakes she done to nani how wrong she understood arnav from starting and how her angry and ego made her do like wrong from her side and i am soo glad that nk also accepted his mistakes and become responsible now and loved nani 😘 very house and child need a elder in house like nani who is soo understanding sensible loving caring and supporting and show us rightful path and giving right and good advices 🥰😘❤️ ... Lavanya is right in her place too he got to know abt her mother's accident and abt her brother accepting for be slave to khushi for 6 month is not a small thing upon that her husband irresponsible behaviour and her pregnancy hormones taking troll on her and and she is emotionally hurt and pregnancy hormones make it increases even more ... The most important person of her life got hurt beczs of her husband and sister-in-law and she even things because of her her brother have to go through alot its really hurts yar 🥺🥺 soo Lavanya will take time u forgive and forget what happen but soon she will come around both of them because for her his brother's happiness is very important 🥰😘 post soon
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing soul Nani is. Khushi is also changing so so much. Lavanya also needs to let go and forgive
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